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americansunrise
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Work in Progress, need feedback!

Post by americansunrise » Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:54 pm

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Anything is fair game, I'd love to hear ideas and feedback on this track, or this one:

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Would love to just hear what anyone thinks. Vocals on 2nd track are me.
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Re: Work in Progress, need feedback!

Post by americansunrise » Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:28 am

Bump :)
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Re: Work in Progress, need feedback!

Post by hutyluty » Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:26 am

2nd one is much better- love the way the vocals float in and out, very radioheadish and that. The dynamics are all quite flat thiough, you might want to have the track swelling and falling at sections?

good work
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