Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue

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Cubicle
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Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue

Post by Cubicle » Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:05 pm

Really into piano as it seems.

Would love some feedback on my latest work.
Will post feedbacks on other soundclouds!

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Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue

Post by Cubicle » Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:06 pm

Bumping for some feedback
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Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue

Post by Lectric » Sun Mar 20, 2011 11:12 pm

i think the horn in the intro is a bit cheesy and lacking depth, and the beat is a bit empty. all around i feel there is something missing from the over all tune. its a great start to a track tho, just not all the way there yet. keep at it!
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Re: Cubicle - Patience Is a Virtue

Post by JohnCaza » Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:07 am

yo from a pianist's perspective, i'd try to stay in a key and your melody is simplistic / a bit cheesy. however, if that's what you're going for that's cool. also try giving the piano a trancy feel with a bit of simple delay, see if you like how it sounds.
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