New track for yous

[fubar]

Hello all, heres a mp3 clip of a track ive been working on over the past week, all positive/negative feedback is much appreciated

Muuzar - Ghost Train

Cheers

[rusko]

eugh! dirty dirt dirt that snare is natty bruv nuff reverberation sound tight nice up

[ramadanman]

kick needs to be punchier i think and louder in the mix

i think the mix needs more space - the compression really gets rid of some of the space. perhaps a slower tempo

i'm not hearing enough bass either - i like to slam on large compression to really bring it up

the drum arrangement at times is a bit too random, as are the synths. makes it hard to listen to.

overall, a bit too busy, and not punchy/bassy enough

[fubar]

kick needs to be punchier i think and louder in the mix

i think the mix needs more space - the compression really gets rid of some of the space. perhaps a slower tempo

i'm not hearing enough bass either - i like to slam on large compression to really bring it up

the drum arrangement at times is a bit too random, as are the synths. makes it hard to listen to.

overall, a bit too busy, and not punchy/bassy enough

Cheers for that, really helpful, see what you mean about it being a bit busy, will see if i can try and make it all a bit cleaner and make the bass and kicks punch a bit more. Ive basically been playing it real loud through my jbls so I can hear the subs come through and probably not working on it coming through at lower levels and being punchy.

[the grumpy one]

half way tru the tune & theres still no propa drop! plus theres to much going on in the tune! take stuff out!