Borderstep - Interfector [ Professional murder music ]

[Borderline]

So i'm working on this track :
Soundcloud

I know it's short, but i'm working on that, too ..
But first in want to know what you guys think of the sound and how it goes .
Give it a listen and tell me what you think . What can i improve and what catches your ear in a good/bad way ?
Critize with everything you've got !

edit: And i also wanted to ask what do you hear from the vocals ? Do you understand them ??

Thanks, byes

[efence]

like all beats and basses
dont like the multi saw doesnt seem to really fit the vibe or mix
dont like the weird random sequences in second half
so basically love the drums and bass and everything for first 1/3... hate everything else

[Borderline]

It's not "random sequences" .. it's an audioillustrated story . Or at least.. trying to be .
But Thank you . Definitely got some information out of this post .

edit:

And hey man, what do you mean by MULTi SAW ? Can you say the second in the track ?

[CowardlyLion]

The bass is nice! Great drums. I like the intro, samples are well placed throughout the song. I think that the bass level should be a tad bit higher though. The sequence at the end works well, but try it with a different sound and see how that goes. Nice job overall! Keep it up.

[Borderline]

The bass is nice! Great drums. I like the intro, samples are well placed throughout the song. I think that the bass level should be a tad bit higher though. The sequence at the end works well, but try it with a different sound and see how that goes. Nice job overall! Keep it up.

Thank you for the feedback . Which sound should i change ? I don't understand again, there's many. .

Anyone else ?

[Elartsen]

this track is pretty sick to be honest but not mixed well. some sounds too loud and bass is quiet as said above, the sub sounds good but i dont think there is enough, i recon this track should groul or grumble in the speakers. drums are nice but not mixed well....sick track though. alot of potential keep up this great work!

[Borderline]

this track is pretty sick to be honest but not mixed well. some sounds too loud and bass is quiet as said above, the sub sounds good but i dont think there is enough, i recon this track should groul or grumble in the speakers. drums are nice but not mixed well....sick track though. alot of potential keep up this great work!

A big thank you for the honest feedback, it's what i need

edit:
I uploaded a slightly updated version .

[Borderline]

Bump-uh!

And hei guise, i wanted to ask if you understand the lyrics ?
WHat do you hear ?

[Borderline]

Bumpidy,
still wondering about the vocals,
can anyone confirm? i'd be thankful!

[Borderline]

Bumpidy,
still wondering about the vocals,
can anyone confirm? i'd be thankful!