!!!HOT NEW DUBSTEP/GRIME HYBRID INSTRUMENTAL!!!

[jables]

Just finished a new instrumental and I would really appreciate some feedback or just have a listen...Thanks very much http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IWWhidaA-e8

[kaiori breathe]

I don't listen to a lot of grime so I can't tell whether you've hit the mark stylistically or not, I barely even know what the genre is to be honest, but I think this is a pretty cool track with some really nice little touches. Well done.

[jables]

I don't listen to a lot of grime so I can't tell whether you've hit the mark stylistically or not, I barely even know what the genre is to be honest, but I think this is a pretty cool track with some really nice little touches. Well done.

cheers man, thanks very much for the feedback, really appreciate it!

[JAWSOME]

nicely produced mate. xoxo

[jables]

nicely produced mate. xoxo

cheers man, i feel it's missing sumthing tho, any ideas?

[jables]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Vk9NtbXubM here's a new hip hop instrumental to throw into the pot

[JAWSOME]

nicely produced mate. xoxo

cheers man, i feel it's missing sumthing tho, any ideas?

I'd say a little more variation in the bass, that's just my opinion tho..

keep it up!

[jables]

nicely produced mate. xoxo

cheers man, i feel it's missing sumthing tho, any ideas?

I'd say a little more variation in the bass, that's just my opinion tho..

keep it up!

ye, that's what i was thinkin, dont want people thinkin it's a loop,lol

[JAWSOME]

nah to right, keep us updated

[jables]

nah to right, keep us updated

will do famalam

[jables]

nah to right, keep us updated

will do famalam

just thought, if you have a youtube account then add me and sub me so i can keep you up to date properly if you want

[JAWSOME]

No worries, subbed and added

[jables]

No worries, subbed and added

cheers, accepted and subbed back,done

[jables]

any new listeners?

[Robert Holmes]

Sounds spot on to me... Im really new to producing, but Im learning that less is more sometimes. You have a great down tempo ambient track there, and yeah Im sure you could fill it in with more bass or other samples, but I would def hold on to that edit and if a dj wants to bolster it up theyll mix another track into it... jmho Great song!!!

[jables]

Sounds spot on to me... Im really new to producing, but Im learning that less is more sometimes. You have a great down tempo ambient track there, and yeah Im sure you could fill it in with more bass or other samples, but I would def hold on to that edit and if a dj wants to bolster it up theyll mix another track into it... jmho Great song!!!

cheers man,thanks for the feedback, i'll keep you posted on this thread with the new edits as they're finished, thanks for the compliments to, positive feedback means alot coz I can go and use it constructively

[jables]

ANY NEW LISTENERS FOR SOME FEEDBACK?

[jables]

new listeners?

[Astrobear]

I think the lead is really cheezy, it could use some movement throughout the song in my oppinion.

nice bass though, but it gets a tad repetetive