constructive critisism needed!!!

[prohjecktom]

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i was just wondering if you could help me out, anything, compliments, or constructive criticism ETC

cheers guys

[Robert Holmes]

Well done!!! I think it would make a great record for a dj looking to mix vocals over or something along those lines. As a stand alone track i think it gets a little monotonous, but again I think it would make a great addition to a set esp. if theyre using three turntables, looking to scratch or, or lay vocals over it.

[prohjecktom]

Well done!!! I think it would make a great record for a dj looking to mix vocals over or something along those lines. As a stand alone track i think it gets a little monotonous, but again I think it would make a great addition to a set esp. if theyre using three turntables, looking to scratch or, or lay vocals over it.

yeah i was hoping to get some vocals, but i'm currently in contact with a record lable, and any vocals i find have copyright attached to them, it's like a big fuck off stamp lol

[IOMac]

First thing i notice, is big fat drums
I'd agree that you could get the track to vibe more in parts by adding points of interest but as the bare bones of a tune/demo this is good. Maybe find a female singer for the vocals because it will push this track so much further.

[deji_f]

by the way thought your track was sick gave it a download it should be heavy to use in my dj sets

Sorry if this is the wrong place to post but I kind of wanted the same; some people to compliment, critisize or just listen to my music as I'm trying something abit different nowadays
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[Grazolandia]

Sounds good !