benton influenced. feedback please

[lylo]

oi oi!

started this earlier but not sure what im missing out on. the tune still feels very empty like in needs that extra noise.
Im really feelin bentons work at the minute so I've bassically stole his swagger and tried to make my own version. shameless.

http://soundcloud.com/lylo-uk/jake-work-in-progress

any feedback good or bad is always welcome. just want to know people thoughts.

Thanks

[hutyluty]

this is sick, just commenting so i have a placeholder for when you post the finished ting

[lylo]

nice one mate! glad ya like it! anything you want to change about the tune? bo

[lincoln]

I think what you might be missing is a snappier snare. The snare in there is kinda weak... not saying you should put a brostep snare in there... just something a little snappier and higher pitched. And maybe a tiny bit louder. Otherwise, this tune is awesome. Great atmosphere, good rhythms, good bass. 320 when you're done please?

[lylo]

I think what you might be missing is a snappier snare. The snare in there is kinda weak... not saying you should put a brostep snare in there... just something a little snappier and higher pitched. And maybe a tiny bit louder. Otherwise, this tune is awesome. Great atmosphere, good rhythms, good bass. 320 when you're done please?

yeah ive been working on this since and that snare was the first thing i thought needed sorting out. thanks for the tip anyway man.
as for the 320 i always put up my tunes for free download anyway so don't worry about that. its only fair to share

[lylo]

this is sick, just commenting so i have a placeholder for when you post the finished ting

here it is mate, enjoy

http://soundcloud.com/lylo-uk/jake

[hutyluty]

cheers, bigups

i tried to make something similar here- have a listen if you like

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=194173

[lylo]

yeah i like it. reminds me of that new loefah/pinch tune... id add a few more percussion bits in there tho. but i like the overall mood of the tune