I've been working on this for 13 hours straight.

[Squ1bbles]

Can I just get some feedback on this track? I'm extremely tired so I'm going to go to sleep, but it would be nice to see some honest criticism when I wake up.

[kaiori breathe]

I assume you mean the one in your sig? intro sounds ok, but the snare sound does grate on me a bit, something a bit sharper and less squidgy would work nicer i think, synthy blips sound nice and the bass sounds good, although I can barely hear any sub :/ so i'd bring that out a bit, musically the drop sounds ok, but not amazing to me, production wise the synths are fairly good, the hi-hats come through really strong i think, i'd bring them down just a tad, there's enough variation for me to not get bored and stop listening so that's a good thing, in terms of structure, I'd maybe cut the intro in half, split up that first drop, expand your breakdown a bit, then bring the drop in again and go for an outro after that, it seems a little messy structurally to me, but I'm severely anal about structure so that could just be personal taste. All things considered it's a decent tune and you should be able to go to bed happy in the knowledge that you've made something interesting and well put together. It just needs a little refinement I think, but that can wait till morning

[Squ1bbles]

Yes, I meant the one in my sig. I appreciate the words, and you're pretty right about every suggestion. Thanks!