[Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

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Pred3
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[Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

Post by Pred3 » Fri Apr 29, 2011 7:09 pm

Just started this track a couple of days ago, would love any fresh ideas to add to the current mixdown. Thinking of adding a jazz, slightly distorted lead guitar in somewhere but havent gotten around to synthing it. Ive hardly worked on the wobble patches, so i know they need work. ty for listening


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Pred3
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Re: [Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

Post by Pred3 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 8:57 am

bump...

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Re: [Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

Post by anotherday » Sat Apr 30, 2011 9:23 am

I think the first "are you a crazy person" sounds out of place in the mix, the rest of the vox sound fine where they are. Your snare sounds a bit flat to me. I like the piano that comes in later in the track, goes good with the vibe. Have you thought about putting some hats or percussion in the intro? Since you were talking about the lead guitar sound, it could be cool to take out your higher pitch wobbs and have only the low ones with the guitar playing over it.

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Re: [Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

Post by Pred3 » Sat Apr 30, 2011 6:20 pm

exactly feedback i was looking for.

Thanks man. The snare sounds flat because i havent layered my own in yet.


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Re: [Feedback] Say So[WIP] minimal

Post by Kinky » Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:28 pm

Oh was about to comment on the snare aswell. It sounds like a wooden drum pad. Like one for practicing xD.

The wobble tones are a bit rough, but like you said, you haven't done much work on it. I really like the wobbles though, they fit well. The vocals all fit well too. Great chill, minimal vibe.
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