[FEEDBACK THREADS] NEW tim berg dubstep edit

[Bonz]

Looking for some feedback on the latest...
just a preview...sort of unfinished.
drop me a comment if u feelin it.
timed comments welcome

http://soundcloud.com/bonzeecleaven/tim ... nce-bonzee

Thanks guys!

[Bonz]

BUMP
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[T-Flex]

Hey Bonz! I wish I could say nicer things but this track has a long ways to go. All the parts that you've written don't mesh well or match up with the original track, they are not in the same key or scale as the original song so it sounds super off. That being said, your drop sounds pretty sick and I think if you transposed all your instruments to match the song and did some major re-working, your track could sound super awesome.

In case it helps the song is in the key of C# minor. The main hook's chord change is E major, B major, Ab minor, C# minor. Keep at it!

[Bonz]

ok im hearin ya.
just to be clear though which part are we talkin about?
the piano chords or???

[Bonz]

ok redone again....last one sucked i know....
let me know if its any better.
feedback would be fantastic.
cheers!

http://soundcloud.com/bonzeecleaven/tim ... nce-bonzee

[T-Flex]

Better! The piano is good for sure, but what I was talking about was the wobble basses and such that you've added. They're all based off the key of C and don't mesh too well or complement the original track.

keep at it man

[Bonz]

Ohh I'm not tryin to mimic the melody of the original.
I get u tho. Only the intro was coming off similar.
Cheers brutha.