New banging Dubstep project, unpolished.

[ARTFX]

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So yeahh been working on this for one full day, spending quite some time doing the vocal work. Also this is the first time I created a high pitched wobble sound.

[Dosva]

Overall I like this tune. The intro is good, the vocal work is pretty neat and the heavy bass is really nice, but I'm a little undecided about the high pitched bass, It just seems a little out of place maybe.

[ARTFX]

I think that's just a matter of taste actually, also had quite some good responses on the high pitched bass. So I might leave it like this but with just a little bit more effects and processing.

[ARTFX]

Uploaded new version in opening post!

[ARTFX]

No-one?

[Kroesial]

Pretty sick, only thing I would leave out is the sound that comes every bar, some sort of synth, because it takes away from the dynamic imo. It's fine in the intro, but after the drop it becomes annoying. The high pitched bass is a matter of taste, I like it.

[Dosva]

I think that's just a matter of taste actually, also had quite some good responses on the high pitched bass. So I might leave it like this but with just a little bit more effects and processing.

Yeah, it probably is just a matter of taste, but I'd have to agree with Kroesial. To each their own, either way nice work.

[ARTFX]

Pretty sick, only thing I would leave out is the sound that comes every bar, some sort of synth, because it takes away from the dynamic imo. It's fine in the intro, but after the drop it becomes annoying. The high pitched bass is a matter of taste, I like it.

Yeahhh, I was aware of that. But haven't had any time to make some edits on that synth. I was going to cut it out at some parts, will do that tomorrow probably.

[jimbeaux]

i dig it

[davwuh]

nice tune, sleek production

[ComfiStile]

Very awesome.

[ARTFX]

Thanks for the replies, does somebody have some feedback for me on how to improve this tune even further?

[F L U X]

Great tune, loved the vocal work and I thought the high pitched bass was pretty cool, but there were a couple of places I think it clashed a bit with the lower bass, other than that, fantastic tune.

[subfreq]

Overall I like this tune. The intro is good, the vocal work is pretty neat and the heavy bass is really nice, but I'm a little undecided about the high pitched bass, It just seems a little out of place maybe.

I am kind of with you on the mid-bass squelch sound.

[ComfiStile]

Overall I like this tune. The intro is good, the vocal work is pretty neat and the heavy bass is really nice, but I'm a little undecided about the high pitched bass, It just seems a little out of place maybe.

I am kind of with you on the mid-bass squelch sound.

I think it adds character, something a bit novel sounding. It's prob my fav part of the song really.

[ARTFX]

Yeahh I like the high sound the most, so that one is only going to be processed a bit.

[ARTFX]

Again, updated version in the first post! Changed the title of the tune also.

[MedikProductions]

tbh i don't care for the intro. i like the heaviness and sound of the wobble in the drop, you could change the pitch of it though and vary it up a little more. and the high wobble is a good sound too, maybe less detuned? haha idk i like it though, just change the drop around add some 4th's and 5th's to give it a little more emotion ;]

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=199663

feedback on mine?