Stripped back deep-sub track... Need feedback!

[feetdontfailmenow]

I dug this old track out from the depths of my hard drive and decided I would polish it up a bit. Although I want to keep the minimal vibe going, I feel it sounds a bit incomplete, so any ideas or feedback would be really valued.

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P.s. I know the mastering needs a little more ironing out here and there but I sorta can't be bothered to do it if I'm only going to add new elements later...

Cheers.

[-[2]DAY_-]

i like it the way it is. s'all i can really add, but i might as well bump ur tune cuz its good

[feetdontfailmenow]

Bump...

[-[2]DAY_-]

i really enjoy this tune let us know what you decide to do with it !

[konduit]

yeah man nice. vary the bassline up a wee more melody wise, but that percussion is sick. hearing the silkie/kromestar in this one

[feetdontfailmenow]

Some friends and I have started a new blog called PRIVATEER. It's going to cover/promote all kinds of dance music from dubstep to techno, d'n'b to house (but no trance, because fuck that shit- right?). There's also going to be a series of monthly mixes and we're planning on doing a monthly "sound-cloud roundup" (basically exhibiting unsigned artists we like) so if you're making some forward thinking beats and you're looking for exposure post a track here http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=200167

Anyway our first post is an Interview that did with Simian Mobile Disco where we talk drugs, dubstep and delicacies (literally passed them my phone when they were djing asking if I could interview them for my blog and they said yeah- top blokes!) so check it out!

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P.s. you can follow us on twitter @privateerblog

[the get down]

I like this man- I think a little reverb and delay work could go a long way in filling things out here. I'd love to do a remix of this!

[feetdontfailmenow]

To be honest with you I've sort of run out of creative juices on this one, but if you're saying you'd love to do a remix, how about (because having a remix of a track I'm not going to bother hanging on to would be a bit odd) turning it into a colab? Message me if you'd be up for it I can send you the stems and we can talk styles/ideas. Ta.