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[Skang]

@z6z - dude I'm really digging this. Lovin the deep, dark, tribaly vibe
@jimbeuax - digging the bassline, it's heavy and brutal. maybe add another synth in the background, feels kind of empty to me
@um4mi - 10 minute WIP?! How long will the actual tune be

Here's mine:

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[oprs]

skang- not really sure man, sounds like your going for that dungeon sound. but the synths dont quite work. its like bro dungeon. i like the perc, amp it up a little though so it shines through, id say add some more verb on the synth get it sounding hollow and cut back a little on the lfo rate, the 1:34 part is golden, but the garbled just doesnt fit it too well. but i see what your going for and i do like it.

um4mi- lol, eating a pb and j gonna take this 10 minutes in stride. i really like the atmosphere and stabs and random perc in the background. sets a tender mood. wasnt really expecting the bass to be like that, but i can still dig it. actually yeah i can dig that. then the beat kicks and it makes me wanna walk around like an ape. head bobbin back and forth, back to my primal instincts. i think you need to bring the snare up a little, and change around the repitiveness of the hatsorsnares leading up to the snare. after that i really like the glitch feeling you give it with the back to backs your bringing. just reached the 4:30 mark and i like the little change up, but when you bring the beat back it doesn't flow a 100% i feel like it could sync up a little more for the new change. the part at like 9:27 i would bring in earlier , its got some funk to add to your beat for sure. but overall, good. quality 10 minutes of a tone, thank god it was 387 yois with repitive kick snares and doctor p squeals, nice. nice to have you on the forum, first post was top notch

crow steppa- perc has no power still bro. synth sounds like its crying now. the actual drop, works alot better. id take that back ground synth out man, just doesn't do it for me, but thats my opinion. progress is good progress so keep it the hell up

now fer mine, i tryed this on another song, ive got the tempo starting out at 126 then when the drop comes it switches to 140, i plan to drop it back to 126 afterwards. wanna know what ya guis think
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[BevOh]

Oprsmight be a nub question but I was messing around with switching up tempo KINDA.. but I was just making the 4 bar drum loop stretch out to 8 like half time? Kinda? Just wondering what the correct way to go about automating tempo (in fl if it's daw specific) just don't have time to look it up right now as I'm in bed n il check back tomo just didn't wanna forget.. Thanks mate.

[tripwave]

hey all!

i am new to your forums, and am starting to get more active in my studio. I have a few tracks that are WIP's that I would LOVE to have any form of feedback negative or positive (how we all learn . Some I have 'given up' on...at least for a while so my brain can reset and NOT BE SICK of hearing the same thing over and over and over lmao.. most of you know how that is..

and i would love ideas of things to add/change/rework on any of my projects. i am starting to rid myself of a 'social life' and take my production more seriously, and i hope that reflects in my limited work i have done in the past little while....

anyways in order of most recent:
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"The Wrong Side of Right" - Dubstep - locked myself in my studio for 24hours straight last week and this was the result. i am going to rework some of the synths you hear in the higher end of things and make the piece alot longer, with more subtle variations, among other things...

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"Control2Constant" -Chill Dub - I want to change the name....Ideas anyone?!?

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"Step Like A Badger" - Dubstep - Im really proud of this remix ive started of the "Badger, Badger, Badger" Viral Video, if you've never seen it..youtube badger badger badger lol I have been working on it since the soundcloud upload, but i am extremely unhappy with my current results in Ableton i am going to revert back to how it sounds on soundcloud now..

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"Situation Critical" - Dubstep - Made the day after the Japan Disaster <3 my respects and love goes out to all of them STILL struggling to this day. I haven't worked on it since, I think its shit, but if opinions state otherwise I will consider going back to it and finishing.

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"Sofi Needs Moar Dubstep" vocals of deadmau5's sofi needs a ladder atop of my grimey dub. i have yet to extend this and add a few more things and glitch the vox better.

thanks so much for listening!!

[urbannerd62]

@CrowSteppa - Camel Launcher : intro sounds are cool, im not really great at giving feedback on this sort so bear with me. main synth could use some beefing up, id add some distortion and proper EQing. a little automation/parameter tweaking with your synth is always good, helps it be less boring even if its playing the same notes. percussion doesnt sound bad at all, keep up the good work!

@um4mi - loving the chip notes with the atmosphere in the beginning, fckn awesome ambient feeling along with the dash of space invader madness. the chord one shots are classy too. 1:43 - 2:38 kinda threw me off but it all made more sense when the full percussion came in. i think it sounds better at 4:47+, just my opinion tho. good job bro

and now for some reason soundcloud is not letting me fckn play anything so ill be back.. could use more feedback on my latest WIP tho
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[narrator]

@tripwave - Step like a badger is my favourite of the bunch, the bass is gritty is hell. i really like how it flows together too. good stuff.

@FluidMoShun - really liking the melody of this tune, the drums kinda of weaken the track and the sound itself could probably benefit from some chorus or bitcrushing to bring it out a bit more and give it a nice 8-bit sound, now that would be cool. nice strucure though.

@ jimbeaux - nice sounds man. I could picture it droping into the drums, sub and a stabby sounding pad for the break with little sounds sparsly rolling through it. definitely keep goin with it.


here's something i'm working on for the past few days. it's just the drop with the main section so far. i'm more worried about the structure so far so the mixdown is a bit rough and uneven.

any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
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[Aphile]

@oprs i love what you're doing. songs with this concept are the future of our music. WIth that said I am not a HUGE fan of the lead..but then again as I listen it sounds good Toss a layer of something under that? Maybe something with a hi cutoff and the lo's eq'd out? I also think the intro is drawn out. I feel like it could have been halfed. If you have more content to fill, I'm not tryna cramp your style if youre filling out the toon. But your sounds are quality.

This is a remix of Beat Without Bass by Lil wayne featuring zha zha and freaky. Does anyone dig this? :X
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[oprs]

bevoh- what ill do is start making the track, the one im posting starts a 126, done that for the intro and the 1st "verse" the lead up is still 126 but when it drops i automated the tempo, and it jumps to 140, then after the breakdown i bump it back down to 126. its tedious as shit sometimes, but it gets for interested sounds. ive got on solid sound playing through at the very end of the breakdown back to the "verse 2" and when you hear the tempo change it does something to the sound that i rather enjoyed. its all about experimentation.

tripwave, i listend to sofi needs moar dubstep for a minute and cut it off, post feed back or you'll be ignored. and next time try not to post 55 songs. clutters the shit out of the pages.

urban- just like you had class at 11 o clock at night right? lol, the voice sounds really distorted with the rest of the song, the percussion is nice, sounds like to much reverb on her voice, ive heard that stab a bunch of places but i cant put my finger on it. other then that i really dig it, and would request a 320.

narrator- sounds like every exissizledatsikle song ive heard. so i mean its not really popping out at me, tis been done alot. but atleast its not full of yois and autobots roll out and shit. i applaud for that, seems like youve got a good grasp on everything.

aphile- i like the original song(Sadly enough) i think teh glitches in the beggining kinda draw away when it stops for a seconds, the drums dont really fit, seems like its not on the right bpm.work with keeping everything fluid and sounding like the same song. keep trying man. we all gotta go up right? lol

added some more to mine and changed some things around.
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[BeastModeForDummies]

@opr - interesting track i liked it, fucking awesome control of that vocal sample

@aphile - honestly i like what youre doing the kick and snare sound out of place, i love all the other sounds though

@narrator - this is my type of step dc what anyone says lol filthy wobbles big ups@!

tune in sig, still filling and working on that generic ass sounding build up dont think ill be upin any more of the tune till its much further from this point. feedback appreciated thanks in advance.

[Phigure]

oprs - liking it. mixdown is solid, vocal sampling is fun. the only thing i would really try working on is consistency. while there's nothing wrong with variance, some parts feel a bit out of place.

narrator - this type of stuff isn't exactly my thing, but it's a lot more tasteful than most other "brostep". production value is pretty nice too.

urbannerd64 - love it. drums are fun and skippy, mixdown is solid, production is excellent, songwriting and progression is really well done and interesting, and the vibe is absolutely amazing.

i'd appreciate it if some people took a listen to this one and let me know what they think. it's kind of a unique 110 thing that isn't really dubstep, but i'd still appreciate your opinions
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[oprs]

phigure song puts me in a good place man, nice and euphoric, great use of stabs. packs a punch to, certainly quality. wouldn't hesitate throwing this in a mix. hope to hear more.

if you could just give me a couple places where it seems out of place would be great, i kinda got alot of things all down at once before i got numb to producing it and tryed actually tweaking everything, so it would be a big help if you let me know man.

[Danimal]

@BeastMode

great mix down. this track has got flow too. really dig it. I'm always down with what you put out.

@Phigure

Not dubstep, but its cool. Got good atmosphere. I'd like more if you added variety to the beat and rhythm.

@urbannerd62

awesome compression going on here. you really know what you're doing in mixing and mastering.

@oorps

love the "mon mon mon" sample. Awesome drums. Real nice compression on these. Love this track.

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[RandoRando]

@ urbannerd how did you obtain that sound'?? what is being sidehcained? compression?

[metzz]

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new clip from myself.
take a listen let me know what you think
thanks
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[ideate]

@Danimal - You've got a great sense of atmosphere in the intro. Less is very much more sometimes. Nice work. The bass sounds a little out of place to me although it certainly makes the track very dark (maybe knock it down a touch). Nice drums also

@oprs - Nice production mate! Each element is clear and nothing sounds out of place. Great subs. The song structure is quirky but I think it works It's disjointed and dark.

@narrator - Awesome!! It made me smile which is a very good thing. Vocal sample is so well placed. Great production. Punchy. Good use of panning and stereo imaging. Nice.


Here is a track I am currently working on, it's a chilled dubsteppy track. Feedback is greatly appreciated. Nice one brothers.

ideate - The Divided Deep (WORK IN PROGRESS)
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[oprs]

metz- aw man its all about the yeah you know and the uh huhs and the silver. leave 3 feedbacks or no one will comment ya shit

ideate- shit makes me wanna jump in the car and ride to the beach, its s o damn nice and mellow. really has a lot of feeling in it, 2:19 blew my hair back like i was using a triphoria man. stunning. truely couldnt get a nicer vibe then this. everything responds well. over all atmosphere is through the roof man, keep that shit up FOR sure.

[ideate]

metz- aw man its all about the yeah you know and the uh huhs and the silver. leave 3 feedbacks or no one will comment ya shit

ideate- shit makes me wanna jump in the car and ride to the beach, its s o damn nice and mellow. really has a lot of feeling in it, 2:19 blew my hair back like i was using a triphoria man. stunning. truely couldnt get a nicer vibe then this. everything responds well. over all atmosphere is through the roof man, keep that shit up FOR sure.

Oh my god man, I had no idea what a triphoria was so looked on youtube. Hilarious. Thanks for the kind words!!

[metzz]

metz- aw man its all about the yeah you know and the uh huhs and the silver. leave 3 feedbacks or no one will comment ya shit

ideate- shit makes me wanna jump in the car and ride to the beach, its s o damn nice and mellow. really has a lot of feeling in it, 2:19 blew my hair back like i was using a triphoria man. stunning. truely couldnt get a nicer vibe then this. everything responds well. over all atmosphere is through the roof man, keep that shit up FOR sure.

i wanted to. but none of the tunes are loading up for some reason, and still arnt. i dont know wtf is going on.

[Loud Flavor]

@ideate: Really diggin' the intro feel. Lovin the chops on the drums, smooth heavy sub. Have some nice percussion movement here.
That ambient feel on 1:52+ is hugeee, auto shivers on there haha. Big tune man, keep it up.

@metzz: Got a nice feeling on your tune man, good stuff here. Don't really know what else to tell ya but hope to hear the finished version. Safe.

@Phigure: Loving the intro atmosphere. Some nice calm movement here, maybe raise the drums up just a bit. Other than that, keep it up.

Loud Flavor - Running (Work In Progress)
And here's my current work in progress, threw down 7 hours on it today. It's almost done, it's just pretty rough on the mix.
Would appreciate any feedback and opinions. Big ups to everyone, safe.
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[Redderious]

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