WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

[Redderious]

@IdeateWow!! This is truly amazing! Good job, that sub at around 3:15 is just makes me in my pants.

@orpsThis intro is huge man! I love the slow wavey tone you have to the whole thing like crazy! that sub break down around 1:40 is crazy as well! Im stoned, and my head is just telling me yes to this track

@DanimalHuge intro as well! your synth work is impressive . Very impressive actually haha! Love the parts where you panned out the vocal samples.

Heres my WIP! let me know what needs to be done and what you think stands out in a better sort of way. Thank yal!

[Redderious]

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feedback post above^

[oprs]

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hey, red. wanna go back and read the first page of this thread?

[Redderious]

@IdeateWow!! This is truly amazing! Good job, that sub at around 3:15 is just makes me in my pants.

@orpsThis intro is huge man! I love the slow wavey tone you have to the whole thing like crazy! that sub break down around 1:40 is crazy as well! Im stoned, and my head is just telling me yes to this track

@DanimalHuge intro as well! your synth work is impressive . Very impressive actually haha! Love the parts where you panned out the vocal samples.

Heres my WIP! let me know what needs to be done and what you think stands out in a better sort of way. Thank yal!

yeah whats the problem?

[Redderious]

I'm a little stoned, i kept hitting submit before i was done... did it 3x

[RandoRando]

@mettz, the little vibrato synth stab before the flux sounding midrange sounds a little out of place, try auditioning different sounds to flow better with the midrange line

[hudson]

My ears are pretty fried right now from a show last night, so none of this feedback is gonna be very technical

Redderious - Nice song, I was expecting it to be all wobbley and annoying when I was listening to the intro, but it wasn't. Thanks The only thing I can thing of right now is that it's a little too bit-crushy for my taste Maybe back off on some of those crunchy, grainy sounds.

Tripwave - Nice synths in those songs, I liked teh w0bz in the the first one a lot. You've got a knack for arrangement too. I'm not usually into the robotic sounds, but you pull it off nicely.

Unbannerd - Smooth song, I like the flow a lot! It gets a little boring though in the first little bit, maybe add some vocals or something?

Here's something I'm working on... would love some advice on where to take it next cuz I feel a little stuck. Also, does anyone have tips for making drums sound more realistic? I'm using good quality recorded samples, but they get a little stale with no movement, ya know?

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[Redderious]

My ears are pretty fried right now from a show last night, so none of this feedback is gonna be very technical

Redderious - Nice song, I was expecting it to be all wobbley and annoying when I was listening to the intro, but it wasn't. Thanks The only thing I can thing of right now is that it's a little too bit-crushy for my taste Maybe back off on some of those crunchy, grainy sounds.

Here's something I'm working on... would love some advice on where to take it next cuz I feel a little stuck. Also, does anyone have tips for making drums sound more realistic? I'm using good quality recorded samples, but they get a little stale with no movement, ya know?

Soundcloud

Thanks for hookin up the feedback huds! Are you talking about there being distortion on the opening or the lead synth? I can't seem to find where you are talking about, i never threw in a crusher but i might just have to go back and eq some things. The outro was my favirote part of the tune, what did you think about that?

I really like your tune, for sure. Im listning in a pair of Apple headphones so i might be missing some of the track. Everything is mixed together so well, thats probably what i liked most about this. Besides that the sample is really chill. Maybe a really small amount of mid bass just to like bring scenes together and what not, doesn't need it thought sounds. Sounds Good!

[hudson]

Yeah, the distortion. It sounded like a bit-crusher to me.

Thanks! There's a >50hz sub in my track that you might not be getting, but i think I will add some mid bass because it felt a little empty there to me too.

[Redderious]

Yeah, the distortion. It sounded like a bit-crusher to me.

Thanks! There's a >50hz sub in my track that you might not be getting, but i think I will add some mid bass because it felt a little empty there to me too.

Where does the distortion, bother you most? At the end your saying? i'm not hearing much threw these headphones so if you could let me know that would be tight.

Haha theres not a chance ill be able to hear that sub. I'll check it when i get home from work using some better headphones that can reach that low. I was thinking about adding some mid to my track as well, in moderation atleast.

[dfsa90]

http://soundcloud.com/dfsa90dubstepprod ... ip/s-9ilc9
the intro is like 2 mins long.

[Redderious]

http://soundcloud.com/dfsa90dubstepprod ... ip/s-9ilc9
the intro is like 2 mins long.

didn't actually look at any of this thread did ya? Its a FB4FB sorta thing if you haven't noticed.

[dfsa90]

woops.

[dmisreal]

@redderious not my type but its good lie the melody but at the end the silence is to long.

@hudson (second track) its ok i know that sample loop from the dsf sample pack contest. no no loops make your own stuff

now mine this is a short wip that i will extend but dont know where to go from here pls let me know
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[hudson]

@hudson (second track) its ok i know that sample loop from the dsf sample pack contest. no no loops make your own stuff

That's because it was for the contest
I didn't really ask for feedback on that one anyways.

[dmisreal]

@hudson (second track) its ok i know that sample loop from the dsf sample pack contest. no no loops make your own stuff

That's because it was for the contest
I didn't really ask for feedback on that one anyways.

sorry

[Killamike49]

I don't really know enough to post any feedback. :/

Is there anything really really off with this, or is it alright?
http://soundcloud.com/raidsiren/8step

[eldoogle]

@ Redderious - I think this might sound better if either the hats were wider or panned, and the kick should be a tad louder. At the same time, it's nice that it hangs in the back. It's only a little too far back imo. Like somebody else said, this track isn't my style but I listened to it all, not so bad. Also, the sub sounds quiet but I've noticed a lot of talk about Soundcloud lately and how it compresses the song when you listen to it on the site. Maybe it doesn't need more sub, but it could.

@ hudson - Very nice! Reminded me of a Led Zepplin song. I wish the top of the bass, the modulated higher portion was little louder or sorta panned back and forth a small amount, not a total 180. Really like it

@ dmisreal - I was thinking all the mixing sounded fine and prominent, but when the wobs started up there wasn't much of a melody. I think thats what your asking feedback for, so my advice is come up with something a tad more complex note wise.

@ Loud Flavor - Wow. Your a pro. Really loud in a good way, good use of compression when things sorta duck. Good track. What do you do to get everything so loud? I recently sent my song off to a ME and the returned version isn't as loud as this.

@ ideate - Interesting drums, melody. Super chill, but not too simple to be boring. At 2:19 I felt like the melody was a little hard to follow, if it was easier maybe it'd be better. At the same time I'm no expert and this may be some peoples bag rite here.

[therebel730]

@detun3r - intro synth is really cool;; drop is a banger,, i like the atmosphere and how it sounds with the ocean sounds; the track in general is is good; mellowed yet still hard.
@debaser1- really wicked vocal samples, defenently and oldschool vibe in this one; im diggin it;; i love the bass man; really good shit;; nothin to complain on my end;; finish it !
@jimbeaux- omg.. vocals.. vocals vocals vocals... 5/5;; bass 5/5; i think that kick is really cool too; this is a good one!
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[tripwave]

@loud flavor - Very nice!!! I totally dig it, great synth work.

@danimal - Im totally digging your work, very creative arrangement.


sorry i havent posted more feedback folks, ive been super busy this week, mostly trying to fix my Motu 828MKII its overheating and going haywire....
i will become more active in the forums in the coming weeks, i promise!!!

thanks for the feedback left for me as well, it means alot!

-Cheers


Tim/Tripwave