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jamiecypher
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New WIP, Need Advice Plz Listen.

Post by jamiecypher » Mon May 30, 2011 10:42 pm

I really loved this track when I first started building it. I was just playing piano and came up with the melody. As I work on it more and more i'm beginning to hate it. This is only my second dubstep track i've attempted, please don't destroy me for trying to use brutal electro. Any honest tips would be helpful, Dunno what to do with the track. I think it may have potential. Please take a moment to give me some honest feedback and maybe some tips + pointers to polish this track off.

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Re: New WIP, Need Advice Plz Listen.

Post by jamiecypher » Tue May 31, 2011 12:55 pm

Oh by the way I used Ableton Live + NI Massive.
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Re: New WIP, Need Advice Plz Listen.

Post by Big Freq » Thu Jun 02, 2011 10:06 am

honestly the piano is pretty cool IMO. i dont know if it fits in with dubstep though...its got potential.

it might be cool to switch the piano to a nasty lead synth. something with LFO on the pitch to give it that ghostly feel.

just my opinion.
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Re: New WIP, Need Advice Plz Listen.

Post by jamiecypher » Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:13 pm

Thanks for the feedback! I'm going to go work on it some more today I think.
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