First Dubstep tune - Criticism?

IconicCAN · Post by **IconicCAN** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 6:54 am

first attempt at creating dubstep.

I used Cubase, along side drum samples I made, audjoo helix and massive
http://soundcloud.com/official-iconic/t ... cts-to-the

LoGage · Post by **LoGage** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:04 am

hey man i thought your shit was fucking beast, but the only thing i would advise (in my opinion of course) is a filthier bass... ya'know like grittier, and a little moar Umph. the wobble though was amazing

so i would give u a solid 8 outa 10
and i firmly believe in feedback for feedback so could you check mine out and tell me wacha think?

Soundcloud

IconicCAN · Post by **IconicCAN** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:18 am

Thanks! It took me all day, it was originally gonna be a hip hop beat, but I was suggested to try dubstep, never in my life would I think of doing that. There's a first for everything! I'll try some distortion and bit crushing next time!

As for your song, I enjoyed it! Really great! I would say just add up some changes here or there, more samples even! It was well done dude!

IconicCAN · Post by **IconicCAN** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:39 pm

Bump!

R Leroi · Post by **R Leroi** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:54 pm

nice track but i dont like the hihats
and you need more bass in the bassline

can u listen my dubstep too?
http://soundcloud.com/rleroi/b-n-m-128b ... p-snippet/

greets

Monstro · Post by **Monstro** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 3:02 pm

More sub, too much separation and the snare has too much verb as well, the whole song sounds like it was made in a huge room, very good first track, but I would try to make your shit as filthy as possible in the synth that you are using before actually effecting anything, thats what I do and I get some beast sounds.

Feedback for feedback?

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.p ... 1&start=20

SunOverSaturn · Post by **SunOverSaturn** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 5:20 pm

Maybe EQ the low freq up some. Nice track though.
Give my first one a listen? It's got more of a hip-hop feel to it, but hopefully you can dig it.

Soundcloud

ArmaFace · Post by **ArmaFace** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:33 pm

o god the fact that one sound is in the right ear and another is in the right is really annoying for me lol.. it's like if someone were to whisper in ur right ear and someone is talking to u in ur left in.. there's no way to comprehend it. That's just my personal opinion though, others might like it but idk.. just a suggestion.

take a listen at mine if u dont mind.
Soundcloud

IconicCAN · Post by **IconicCAN** » Sat Jun 04, 2011 4:09 am

Re-mastered the song so it doesn't sound like it was recorded in an auditorium, as well as added samples and an outro! Same link! Check it out again please!

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