Deep Housey Track for Feedback

[charleswpeck]

Hello All-

New track. still needs some fine tuning but i'd love some feedback in the meantime.
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[charleswpeck]

Bump

[OGP]

This sounds really original, and what a great idea to sample that vocal, works really well. Are you giving out copies?

[Toric]

Really full sound. Digging it for sure dude!

Definitely mastered correctly.

It was kind of slow, is this a deep house trait?

-T

[SGN]

Hate the song you've sampled, love the way you've sampled it. This doesn't really sound much like deep house, but whatever it is [slow mo house?], I like it. Great atmosphere, solid beats and lovely melancholy vibe.

[Ayatollah]

feeling this. Not sure about the "yeah" and "take em to the bridge" samples. other than that, great job.

[charleswpeck]

Thanks for all the positive feedback everyone!

@Ayatollah: I agree.... Gets a little irritating like halfway through the track... might make some adjustments there.
@OGP: I can definitely send you a copy! ... going to bring down those hi hats though and maybe make a few other level changes if you'd rather wait? The track in your sig is fucking brilliant by the way, keep it up!!
@TORIC: Crazy stuff going on there, really original. Really dig that kit... are you using massive? Could use a little more sub action.

Thanks again guys!

[Loz_Idea]

yer very nice track, very atmospheric.
i do think the vocal samples are over-used, i always like to use samples sparingly, keep the listener anticipating
nice work, fairly professional sounding track

[ElSonido]

Love the vibe. It's unique in a great way. Fantastic work.

The only thing I could say in terms of improvement is that cowbell/pan bang may be a tad loud. It feels like part of the main line instead of sitting back with the percussion. The only other thing which is a very minor gripe and purely personal preference is the last section feels a little repetitive, but of course if it were in a set it would be perfect, so ignore that.

Nice.

[Toric]

@TORIC: Crazy stuff going on there, really original. Really dig that kit... are you using massive? Could use a little more sub action.

Thanks for the compliment man! We really appreciate it!

Yea, Massive is the main synth we use. I'll probably be adding more subs in at a later point when the song is put through our completion process!

Good stuff mate!

-T

[charleswpeck]

If anyone's still interested, I've made said adjustments and have uploaded the revised track to my sig.

[Ayatollah]

much better mate... great tune

[charleswpeck]

Thanks a lot man! Really digging your track above!! Great mixdown...samples, keys and bass are all on point. What do you use for those stabs?

[Ayatollah]

thanks mate... those stabs are really just parts of the siren-y sample that appears throughout the song, chopped up and moved around a bit.

[davwuh]

really nice tune

[rbnc]

Feeling it bro!

[charleswpeck]

Cheers for all this everyone! Truly wasn't expecting it!

-The track in your sig is brilliant Robin. Love the swells. Looking forward to that release with Jack Dixon.
-Davwuh, just checked out your band camp page and saw you're into Japanese scores....ever heard Ken Ishii? He was recommended to me by a friend, some great House tunes written for a few animated series (though the series itself isn't much my thing.)

[ElSonido]

Feelin this for sure. The improved version is kickin. Lovely music. Nice mix.

[OGP]

Would still love a copy of this if you feel like its ready to send out now...

[charleswpeck]

Just dropped it on your SC