Antman - Simple Equation (ALL FEEDBACK RETURNED)

[antman]

Just looking for some feedback on a track I put together this past week. All feedback is returned just leave a link!



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[SignalRecon]

Work towards having some sort of change every 4 bars if you are @ 70bpm, or 8 bars @ 140bpm. This ensures that you keep listeners captivated, you have to work with the attention span of the people you are producing for not yours. As far as structure goes, try better-defining your sections, it seems murky a bit to me, layout a proper intro-to drop-to-breakdown/bridge-to-second drop-to outro with the 4 bar variations as noted above. Once you have mastered basic song structures you can really work on innovating, just bring in a tune that you like to your sequencer and just take your cues from it as far as when things change and how long the sections are.

[antman]

Work towards having some sort of change every 4 bars if you are @ 70bpm, or 8 bars @ 140bpm. This ensures that you keep listeners captivated, you have to work with the attention span of the people you are producing for not yours. As far as structure goes, try better-defining your sections, it seems murky a bit to me, layout a proper intro-to drop-to-breakdown/bridge-to-second drop-to outro with the 4 bar variations as noted above. Once you have mastered basic song structures you can really work on innovating, just bring in a tune that you like to your sequencer and just take your cues from it as far as when things change and how long the sections are.

Thanks for the tips dude!

Yeah this track is a bit unstructured, I tried to go for a skittery, weird track.

[subsanctuary]

i like it but i feel like the drum track in simple equation could be more full like maybe adding a couple more elements to it would help, cheers

[downbay]

It's got a good mood, but I feel like it was missing the hihats. With them you could easily add some difference, like previously stated it was a bit dull. Slightly more complexicity and voila!

[antman]

It's got a good mood, but I feel like it was missing the hihats. With them you could easily add some difference, like previously stated it was a bit dull. Slightly more complexicity and voila!

Thanks, hats would sound pretty nice! .... hmmmmm

[zillion]

Have to agree with everyone else there doesnt seem to be much structure with the track...

Needs to have a much longer intro without all the that bass......

Needs more variations throughout i like the loop you go going but just a bit repetative....

Plus needs to have though percussion hits in there aswell....Keep it going though mate