Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

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Extrude
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Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

Post by Extrude » Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:41 pm

Hey guys! Just finished up a track called Rise! Feedback is gold to me. I like to take everything into consideration and I take constructive criticism very well! Be honest! :)

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Re: Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

Post by Neoteny » Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:28 pm

Bruz, that's dope as hell. Though I must say, I really think it should go straight into the snare-on-the-3rd dubsteppy part, as opposed to the more house-y part.

I applaud your use of those higher synths to give it that more emotional, soulful aspect between the heavier stuff, but one again, I really think it should go

|Intro|Buildup|DROP|Dubsteppy|Housey|Breakdown|DROP|Dubsteppy|Housey|Outro

But whatever, man. Music is subjective! Each to their own :D
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Re: Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

Post by omgitzjoe8] » Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:36 pm

IMO I think the breakdown should be held a little longer... it could build up a little more..... and the ending needs a fade or an echo or something. It's a little abrupt...
Aside from that this SH*t's legit...
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Extrude
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Re: Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

Post by Extrude » Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:15 pm

Word dudes! So based off of your feedback, I could probably use some work on the overall "structure" of the composition. That, I'd have to agree with. Well, looks like I have some homework to do to prepare my next track! Lol.

I really appreciate y'all takin your time to reply!! Thanks.

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Re: Extrude - Rise (Original Dubstep)

Post by Neoteny » Sat Jun 18, 2011 1:28 pm

Best of luck, bro :D
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