John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

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John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by ElSonido » Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:01 am

The last of three. Glow is the first. Planning to release under the title Phoenix. Glow. Burn. Rise. Geddit?

I went for a pulsing groove with glow, a more melancholic sound with burn, and an uplift with rise. So this is the uplift. With what I consider a nice pulsy drop that still manages to fit the track.

I'll post burn for feedback some other time, but let me know what you think.



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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by ElSonido » Mon Jun 20, 2011 12:15 am

Some feedback would be tops. Or just listen to it?
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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by charleswpeck » Mon Jun 20, 2011 12:29 am

These are both brilliant tracks man. Would definitely pay for a release ;-)

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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by Sufferhead » Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:17 am

Generally I don't like this style of dubstep (it's never warm enough) but these are quite good.

Rise - this is a pretty good track, well-structured and solidly built. I would like to hear it without those "vocals" though, might be better with those removed and bring up in the mix the other melodic elements (the strings etc) which are a bit too in the background at the moment. It sounds too "busy" as it is, especially around the minute mark.

Glow - good as well, the vocals here really suit it. Maybe the bass could be a little bit more prominent?

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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by mogrizzly » Mon Jun 20, 2011 2:33 am

You gave me some Idea's, Keep it up !!!!

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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by ElSonido » Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:04 am

http://johneth.bandcamp.com/album/phoenix

Here's all three guys. I'd appreciate the support more than you could imagine.
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Re: John.D - Rise More chillout dubstep.

Post by Morgen » Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:16 pm

Not bad..
In both tracks the snare is somewhat weak. Especially in the last part of the second track ("Glow"), the snare is quieter than in the rest of the track.

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