PR Bee - Time Dilation

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Prof Hound
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PR Bee - Time Dilation

Post by Prof Hound » Fri Jun 24, 2011 8:19 pm

Hey guys im new here, thought id stick up a new track im making to see what peeps think!

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any feedback is much apprecriated!
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Prof Hound
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Re: PR Bee - Time Dilation

Post by Prof Hound » Sat Jun 25, 2011 12:09 am

anyone?!
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Nealge
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Re: PR Bee - Time Dilation

Post by Nealge » Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:02 am

It sounds like what you have is the foundation for a full piece. In its current incarnation, it doesn't feel like it goes anywhere. You could think about making the drums a little more complex by adding some hi hat action or something, or you could test out some different rhythms as the song progresses. Try adding some melodies, and get away from as much loops as you have now.

This could be something, just be a bit freer and give it a little more. Hope that helps.
Soundcloud Sequencer drenched, hefty 80's synth leads, and two drops in the same tune! What a bargain!
Soundcloud Proggy melody, up-tempo Drumstepish style, over the top drums, and some unintentional bars of 2/4 thrown in for good measure.
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Prof Hound
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Re: PR Bee - Time Dilation

Post by Prof Hound » Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:47 am

thanks dewd, its all taken onboard 8)
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