New track i made in 4 hours!

[Drum3r]

Track i made in 4 hours still needs a lot more work let me know what you think!

Soundcloud

[sinakil]

Nice _b

[SkinnyMusic]

Nawt bad mang. Some sick synths in there.

[Drum3r]

Heres a better version.....

Soundcloud

[pain]

Not bad. I think I like the intro half better. Could imagine someone flowing on that part and it sounding real nice. If you know any rappers you should look into that. After the drop, is cool too though. Nice sub bass vs whats going on in the mid range in that section. Cool stuff, keep working at it and make it a full track.

[welikedark]

Damn that's a banger in my book.

[Drum3r]

@ pain cheers man appreciate it i have only been doing this a couple months now.it was a rush intro and yes i do i know 2 different guys with 2 styles so def could do also got 2 other tracks in the works one will have one of them rapping over it.

[saint1]

Feeling the synth in the intro, mann

[wwwmoo]

I hope you realize there is absolutely zero sub bass in your tune.
Weak: Not impressive

[Foreplay]

Drop was pretty weak, no bass, and the synth in intro got a little annoying.

[Drum3r]

i will take this into consideration, again i have only been doing this a couple of months still learning the ropes.......btw there is sub bass im still trying to learn to get it right

[ChadDub]

Just get a sine wave (JUST A SINE WAVE), and make it hit a low frequency, that is sub bass.

[Drum3r]

which is what i have done already

[Drum3r]

Are you guys listening to the better version?

[ChadDub]

I did, and i don't hear any sub. You either have your sine wave up too high or it isn't on, check again.

[Drum3r]

wierd? might be the quality then, here at home i have tried it on multiple stereos and can hear the sub fine so i will need to address this

[Drum3r]

it does seem something has happened to the sub in this version, the mixdown on my pc has heaps of sub?

[ChadDub]

I seriously do not know how you can hear any sub lmao

[legend4ry]

It sounds alright, needs a lot of work though : I would spend longer on it - making a track in 4 hours will only make other producers think you should of spent more time on it..

Get some proper sub in there. Try and get more flow, it chops and changes so much its hard to find it at all exciting.

[Drum3r]

k can i ask a favor download this and tell if you hear the sub in this...........http://www.mediafire.com/?e60kqjb52qs4252