Terra Riddim - Self Discovery DEEP DARK PLS LSTN & FDBCK

[TerraRiddim]

I have a super weird feeling about this one, it still needs a lot of fine tuning and some better atmosphere and melody, but for a couple hours work it's pretty good (hopefully)
I don't work a lot with vocals, and this is a bit different than my other tracks, so I definitely need feedback, and hopefully everyone doesn't think it's garbage Ez
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[TerraRiddim]

I actually need feedback for once, so hopefully when people are online, this doesn't fall to the bottom immediately

[nylle]

kick drum seems too soft to me
i feel like if it was a bit punchier it would make that bassline seem a little more aggressive

[jimbeaux]

kick sounds good, i'd say the overall level should be louder for the whole track. its sounds great, i just had to turn my speakers way up to hear it.

[nylle]

haha well there goes my feedback ^ i stand by what i say tho i'd like to hear the kick a little more and im listening through headphones with volume all the way up

[TerraRiddim]

I have the kick low passed, that's why it isn't as punchy, before I bounced it I turned down the volume on the kick but next time I'm working on it I'm probably going to bring it back up, the hi hats need some changes in EQ as well. Thanks for the feedback guys ^^ Probably going to focus on boosting the volume on the overall mix tomorrow so it isn't as quiet.

[TerraRiddim]

Did some more EQ work, and the kick has a bit more punch but still has the soft, lo-passed feel. I used adaptive limiters to help me get a bit more headroom so I can bump the master volume a bit, I'll bounce a new copy and post it up today

[SignalRecon]

Tried to listen but soundcloud cant find it anymore bro.

[SignalRecon]

Post back when you hAve the link again il try to keep this thread floating above the trolls until i get back to the lab. Lots of downtime at work lol.

[TerraRiddim]

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[Dak0]

I have a super weird feeling about this one, it still needs a lot of fine tuning and some better atmosphere and melody, but for a couple hours work it's pretty good (hopefully)
I don't work a lot with vocals, and this is a bit different than my other tracks, so I definitely need feedback, and hopefully everyone doesn't think it's garbage Ez
Soundcloud

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well first of im not gonna try and rip you apart
so what i can tell you from listen to this briefly would be that is too boring man...
add some diversty in it i like the bass and the nice chill/dark vibe its putting out.
but like i said change it up some more

F4F?
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[nylle]

yesssssss definitely sounds a little better
great work!


doesnt sound boring to me but it wouldnt hurt to add some random sounds here and there. it sounds good as is tho. i like repetition and atmosphere and this has it

[TerraRiddim]

yesssssss definitely sounds a little better
great work!


doesnt sound boring to me but it wouldnt hurt to add some random sounds here and there. it sounds good as is tho. i like repetition and atmosphere and this has it

I was thinking I should probably add some Skrillex basses and some samples about face fucking.

lolol glad you're diggin it bruv! I'm not quite done with it but it's getting there, I checked out your soundcloud I'm really diggin some of those tunes, I'll shoot you a message on there but we should collab or something ^^

[SignalRecon]

Il give this a whirl at home a bit later i dont want to be that guy that calls tunes on his ispeakerphone.

[TerraRiddim]

Il give this a whirl at home a bit later i dont want to be that guy that calls tunes on his ispeakerphone.

Haha much appreciated

[theduke_dubstep]

Nice track dude.. Maybe at 1:57 with the vocal solo what happens if you pitch shift up a short hit of vocals by 12 semitones and soak it in reverb.. rekon it might sound prime.

Also maybe a bit more reverb on the hats.. I know it's not ALL about reverb but in this track I think it's probably a good idea.

Even if you didn't do those things it's still a solid track. Nice work dude

[aibeats]

Yeah I like this a lot. It's really nice to vibe to and just drift away. Try testing it in a car with subs. I bet it would be crazy.

[TerraRiddim]

Yeah I like this a lot. It's really nice to vibe to and just drift away. Try testing it in a car with subs. I bet it would be crazy.

The sub layer dominated the rest of the track, loads of bass but it was overpowering so I have to lower it a bit, thanks for the positive feedback! ^^

[a_Dub]

@ Terra Riddim

Cool ideas here man. Like the sounds.

I have to agree with some others, maybe some extra lead lines or something to spice it up. I do enjoy the percussion, the claps are a nice touch.

Also, I see it is running around 7 minutes? Maybe instead of writing extra synth lines (just to add variety for length) cut it down to 3 1/2 minutes and have a shorter, more quality track.

Keep up the great work though man!

[TerraRiddim]

@ Terra Riddim

Cool ideas here man. Like the sounds.

I have to agree with some others, maybe some extra lead lines or something to spice it up. I do enjoy the percussion, the claps are a nice touch.

Also, I see it is running around 7 minutes? Maybe instead of writing extra synth lines (just to add variety for length) cut it down to 3 1/2 minutes and have a shorter, more quality track.

Keep up the great work though man!

Thanks for the FB, working on some minimal synths/pianos to play one of the melodies, keep it chill and open but a little more full sounding