Teesri Aankh-Beautiful Girl (preview) (free download soon!)

[TeesriAankh]

Soundcloud

Check it out let me know what you think. Also, If there are any tracks you wish to have feedback on send them my way

[i.dot]

Good work mate! check out the soundcloud comment for details. oioi!!!

[DjayyFeelgood]

That bass drop is killer kid, Keep it up

[SignalRecon]

Well done!

All of you get on this challenge!
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=206099

[Dak0]

Soundcloud

Check it out let me know what you think. Also, If there are any tracks you wish to have feedback on send them my way

this is awesome id say the wobbles seem alittle bit unpowerful but i think this is fuck rad

[Big Freq]

shit man. this is MENTAL!

ill give you my honest opinion on some things...

too many random vocal samples. having a theme would be more of the way to go.

its seems like the end of the song aka the "mental insanity" is sweet but a bit over done. IMO i think it would be cool to have like a bit of solid beat and use some of those as "fills" at the end. they are programmed great, if this song was played out i could see people finding it hard to dance too.

great job man! i followed you on soundcloud.

[VenaCava]

i like this a lot man! =) My only suggestion (unless you want to keep it) is to change the snare sample. but besides that it sounds awesome!

[TeesriAankh]

I appreciate it and I do agree about the snare sample I just want to go for a really rock music type snare I just don't know how to get that sound.

[Chees3]

I love the drop. I wasn't really expecting it to be there ha Good track!

[steeze]

Liking it man, live sounding drums are cool. The drop sounds a little disjointed with all the samples though, Id stick to one every 32 bars, 16 at the most and try and get more of a groove going

[Geek Boy]

Awesome production, love those proghousey synths! Not sure I'm wild about those drum hits, that's probably just a personal preference thing though. Also when the mad bass stuff starts happening, it feels slightly overpowered by the drums, I think you want the bass a bit further forward in the mix. Generally speaking great tune though!

[SlumCity]

the body of the drop after the "bass" vocal sample is a little to stop and start with no real flow. the intro is great. really good. i like the chopped in vocal samples , they would sit better if the rest of the track wasnt so chaotic after the drop. i totally agree with everyone else about the snare.... you can keep the fatness off the rock style but it still needs a tight top end to stand out of the mix without overpowering it. i think if you just layer a 909 snare on this one and eq them right itll be dope.

[Colton813]

It's a little bit too glitchy. nothing to really just listen to and bob your head if you know what i mean. Other than that, shit is good. Check out mine. http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=206394

[TeesriAankh]

I understand what y'all are saying but I'm really into that spastic drumfunk/randomized drumming type sound so I'm trying to incorporate that into my dubstep productions. I find that a lot of dubstep even some of the harder stuff to be quite boring and repetitive. So I'm trying to go for something a little more out of the box and give people something they won't really expect on the dancefloor. I actually spend quite a bit of time making sure that it is kind of breakcore esque and all over the place. Anyway I really appreciate all the comments =)

ps: like I said if there is something you want me to hear and judge please send it my way

[QCB]

Sick as hell!
I like your style of drop!

Add another snare, and give the beat a little more meat.
Good job!

[azmacbro]

Sorry it took so long for me to Reply for your Feedback! Just moved from Phoenix, AZ to Duluth, MN... As for your Song, I Love it! Definitely start to use Sidechaining for your Sub Bass if you haven't already. That's one of the Number one things to do to Clear up any lower Frequencies so your Kicks Hit harder and your Sub Bass Pumps and Breathes! Is your New song getting close just yet?

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