House / Electro House Feedback

[influx]

Lookin for some feedback on some tracks of mine that I've been working on, any criticism is welcome

If you want me to check out any of your tracks just post em and I'll check them out as soon as I can

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my Metal Mario WIP has been posted in the dubstep production forum section in the WIP thread but I figured I might as well throw it up here if I'm already going to post one of my tracks

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Thanks

[MedikProductions]

i can't really critique hard because i'm not on my monitors (just some crappy desktop speakers cuz i'm out of town). the dada life one i don't know the original much but it sounds good. i really like the metal mario one, the samples are a bit too loud. sounds like a cool mix to play live, has a bit of commercial feel to it.

the drop should be more epic, way too sneaky (not the take you by surprise kind of sneaky, the oh it's here? kind) you should add a big pause and mario saying "it's a meee a m-" and cut it off with the drop or something corny like that. keep it up, and keep me updated i would like to hear the completed project

i'd link you to my stuff but i'm way too lazy to find threads. might be easier for you to just go to my soundcloud, in my sig. keep it up

[influx]

Hey man thanks for the feed back, the funny thing is that that's how the first drop originally was but I felt like it smacked the listener over the head too hard xD Might have to experiment with that one.

But I'm checkin out some of your tracks right now, the Jennifer Lopex remix is amazing man.. I love those pitched vocals, sounds great and really adds alot to the track, great vibes

Also listened to Drop Dead, again great stuff, enjoying the different wobbles throughout the song and the occasional melody that chimes in, good stuff