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VenaCava
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Biotics (FEEDBACK WANTED)

Post by VenaCava » Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:08 am

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Post by DJ Richie Rich » Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:22 am

wicked bass

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ElSonido
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Post by ElSonido » Tue Jul 05, 2011 9:38 am

love the rave synth at the very beginning.

The slidey lead is a bit too loud at the very start.

The vocals are a great touch.

In some ways I wish it didn't degenerate into noise step, but I guess that was the intention. In terms of mixing, it's pretty well done. The midrange does suffocate the snare a bit but it's pretty good. If you really want to go for the skrillex vibe, add a big reverb splash to the snare and some heavy parallel compression/EQ.

I really like the 'down' parts in the track though, and the pitch warped vocals.
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nftfhx
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Post by nftfhx » Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:49 pm

very nice bro, pretty much summed up above
leads a bit loud and the vocals sounded great, i think you should use a little more of them or bring them forward a bit
where did you get the sample?
the break was really effective too mate, i liked it a lot:)

VenaCava
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Post by VenaCava » Tue Jul 05, 2011 4:35 pm

Thanks for all of the feedback guys, I am going to put up an updated mix soon. And for nftfhx, If you're talking about the vocal sample that is just me singing, I took it from an old song I made a month or so ago, that I put up then took down really fast. x)

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Post by nftfhx » Tue Jul 05, 2011 10:06 pm

i was, that's really cool man!
good job:)

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