Zelik - Deprivation

[Zelik]

Here's a song that I am currently working. It's a slight turn into a different musical direction for me. I just needed any suggestions on improvement. I will gladly give feedback in return, if wanted.

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[StratoJazz]

I think that your tune is good man. I like how you use alot of different synths in the chorus for the tune. You could use more panning on your tracks to create this cool communication between your instruments.

Keep it up man, don't let this forum get to you. The production quality of your tracks is only going to get better.

[MedikProductions]

the snare and kick could each use some more punch. and hats have a little too much reverb imo. but i love the drop though, very melodic stuff..just how i like it. great structure too

[ElSonido]

I <3 big organ sounds. Nice.

Bangin kick, check.

Nice bit of sub, check.

Decent snare sound, check.

Good transition to the drop!

Apart from the hats, it sounds very mono, as pointed out. If you have a lot of 'instruments', take advantage of the stereo field. The hats may be able to lose a db or two, or gain a tiny lick of reverb, but the production quality overall is pretty damn good. All the synth sounds, while nothing, amazing, are well used and fit well together. You captured a good dynamic moving into the drop. Well done.

Decent breakdown too.

[Zelik]

the snare and kick could each use some more punch. and hats have a little too much reverb imo. but i love the drop though, very melodic stuff..just how i like it. great structure too

The hats don't have any reverb
The snare and the organ has some, though. Maybe that could be what you're hearing?

[DickheadD]

Hey, It sounds very nice,I agree what is wrote above. If it has a decent vocal,it could be even better. Keep it work man! And If you have a time,take a look at my new song,thanks http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=207703

[paradigm001]

Yea it sounds well produced and all it just needs a vocal or extra melody over the tune. It will be blank without it.

[Zelik]

Yea it sounds well produced and all it just needs a vocal or extra melody over the tune. It will be blank without it.

Yeah, vocals will complete it. It's just pretty difficult for me. I don't really work with vocals too much. I've only sampled a few times and I just don't really know where to start when it comes to finding vocals. Should I just go out of my way to record my own?