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Lype
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First Track Feedback

Post by Lype » Tue Jul 12, 2011 5:16 pm

Hey, could I get some feedback on this track I've made, it's my first really, just been messing around with FL studios now for a while and this is my first attempt to make a full track, please lemme know what you think. 8)

Soundcloud
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Lype
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Re: First Track Feedback

Post by Lype » Wed Jul 13, 2011 11:58 pm

Soundcloud

New track, any opinions on either one would be awesome :)

paradigm001
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Re: First Track Feedback

Post by paradigm001 » Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:09 am

beg sounds cool. Your drums are maybee a little clipped but thats no prob. Lets see where this goes. THat snap sound is too midrange. I think you chose the wrong bass sound for the drop. It fades away to quick and the low notes are noisy. I think if you fucked with the synth some more it could sound grimmyer. Good first tune through. My first tune is in my sig. Its called tester. Check it out and give some feedback :)

I just think that bass isint a solid enough sound, maybee you can layer it with a saw? Are using the sytrus? What synth is that. You have the ideas just not the right sound even if you want it to sound off and a little weird the bass sound is too loose and grates your ears.

Congrats for posting though. Keep producing!
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.

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