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[Ayatollah]

here's one i just finished last night, i apologize (sort of) for the length, sometimes you just have to make those eight-minute journeys, amirite?
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I like it, I think that overall it's a solid track. I'm especially fond of the choppy deadboyesque drums. It sounds really out of tune in the beginning though until the drums really kick in. Also, the female vocals around the 4:20 mark are a tad bit too loud maybe?

[djskipabeat15]

check it out

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[djskipabeat15]

how do u post ur soundcloud like that?

[djskipabeat15]

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[hutyluty]

[soundcloud]write the url of your tune in here[/soundclou d]

[djskipabeat15]

how do u do ur soundcloud like that ^^^

[djskipabeat15]

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[homework sweat]

here's a garage-y house tune i made a few days ago. as the description says, i can't mix down tracks for jack + it's unmastered, but have a listen anyway/lemme know what you think!

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also, here's a ginuwine refix i made a while ago. also unmastered + with levels possibly off.

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[VoteYes]

@benq - Nice tune man, the drums are sick, I like that noise/snare thing you got going. The groove after the last drop towards the end is dope!

@homework sweat - Pretty nice tune but, as you say, really needs a proper mixdown. The keys that come in later are real nice adn should probably be used earlier. The bassline sounds a bit off in places too.

2 step ting I finished recently:

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[sub'craze]

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[OllieScott]

Been lurking these forums for a while, especially the house forum. Thought I'd finally sign up.

@ruari89 - Liking this, maybe theres a bit to much reverb on the drums, could just be me though.

Heres a house track I've been working on. Not to sure on it wanted some other opinions on it.

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[homework sweat]

@ruari89: digging the buildup + the bassline, could do without the reverb at the start though (like ollie said.) also, thanks for pointing out the bass thing on the first track. notation-wise, it looks correct but i might have to change it up a bit without putting it up an octave. guess i'll have to look into mixing tutorials! hahahaha.
@subcraze: killer track! the time-stretched vocal sample chop in the middle sounds a bit weird at times, but apart from that it's really good.
@olliescott: pretty good track. the bit where the 303 mod goes all over the place before the breakdown is big!

[phrex]

it's been a long time since i last produced a housier tune.. but now here we go. darkest house available haha..

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[dubloke]

Neither of these are house but meh

Grime:
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Juke maybe?
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[OllieScott]

@Dubloke Like the grime track, only thing that I Dont really like is the cowbell. Sounds a bit off to me.


Been addicted to 303s and 808s recently, could probably do with a better mixdown and master
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[tunabomber]

just finished this one:

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[clifford_-]

help yourselves!
any feedback would be nice as im not /that/ brushed up on the house scene!

http://www.mediafire.com/?s3vdh0yv4w4m83r

[hutyluty]

@tuna bomber/phaid- love that song- sent you a pm about it

@clifford- some good synths in the intro, think they could do with a little bot more reverb though to help them blend into the mix more. Really good use of panning in the song to keep the mix clean- that little melody in the background is a tad quite though coming in at 1:29, would like that to be a bit louder- nice tune though mate

@olliescott-tune is fire, only thing is i could do without them crashes all the time personally- takes away from the lean hard hitting synths and bass if you get what i mean, makes it a bit flabby

heres mine- ostgut inspired techno

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[KeeveBC]

Not really been producing much as i'm focussing on other stuff just now. Almost finished off this last night. Really struggling with the 2nd drop's vocal switchup though.
Will give others stuff a listen later on.
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