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SytrixDubstep · Post by **SytrixDubstep** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:37 am

just kinda worked out a little intro and minor drop to a song which i really love but just looking for some advice/ thoughts on where i could take it. obviously some of the bass sounds need some work with some mixing and what not and blending the sounds to fit together, but i would love to hear what you think thus far of the song. i will give feedback in return for anyone looking for it. just give me a link in your post. thanks a lot i really appreciate it guys... here is the link,

http://soundcloud.com/sytrix/invasion-wip

DJNARKUS · Post by **DJNARKUS** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:43 am

Sick drop! Likein that bass.

Foreplay · Post by **Foreplay** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:49 am

veddy nice, veddy nice.

SytrixDubstep · Post by **SytrixDubstep** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:55 am

DJNARKUS wrote:Sick drop! Likein that bass.

left you a comment on the youtube video

mrmcgee · Post by **mrmcgee** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 4:26 am

The mixing is well done, and you've got a really cool lazer type sounding drop synth. I like it a lot! I think this style of song would work really well with some glitch stuff like stuttering, rewinding, etc. It would really spice it up.

KillMachine · Post by **KillMachine** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:20 am

The writing itself is really bomb, so I'm going to focus on tips and pointers for making that writing sounding as sick as it deserves.

Your drums don't really come out in the mix as hard as they should. It's a solid simple drum loop thats very critical to keeping those complex wobbles in place. That said later in the track I feel like they are fine. This could be because of masking, their is another sound in the same frequency range that is covering them up. Try punching holes in certain sound and then raising other sounds in the same freq range so it comes through a little better. Between 20hz-20khz there is only so much space, so try and fit everything in so it plays well with others.

I feel like the track could use a little more variation. I was really impressed at first but I begin to lose interest near the end. Maybe just some wicked transitions, or more dialogue could help it stick out just a touch more.

https://www.soundcloud.com/killmachine
give me a quick listen and let me know what you think, if you have soundcloud we should add each other.

SytrixDubstep · Post by **SytrixDubstep** » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:45 pm

other opinions?

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