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AirRake
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A Melodic dubstephousish track [Updated]

Post by AirRake » Sat Jul 30, 2011 10:52 pm

Hey just finished this up, tell me what you think. Feedback appreciated
thx for listening, cheers

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truekimbo2
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Post by truekimbo2 » Sat Jul 30, 2011 11:17 pm

8/10 on a harsh rating scale.

The only thing is it kind of sounds like you used too much stereo expansion/reverb on everything all at once. also it gets repetitive by the end of it. Fix those two things and you'll have a modern banger.

AirRake
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Post by AirRake » Sat Jul 30, 2011 11:29 pm

ha yeah it was my first go at a lead synth pretty much so i was kina at a uhhh what do i do situation lol yeah thx for the feedback man

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Post by ReAnimate » Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:09 am

I'm glad to see other producers out there pushing the melody. I love the Star trek effects.

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Re: A Melodic dubstephousish track check it out!

Post by paradigm001 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:07 am

The kick and especially the snare are too squashed. Good fx though/time stretching. I thihnk the music needs to come down a tad for the kick and snare but thats just my opinion. I like the appegiator melody. Its just too loud.
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AirRake
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Post by AirRake » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:15 am

yeah i was playing with the volume of the music and drums ratio and i was thinking about turning it down, just didnt wanna make it too quiet or too much drums but yeah i'll play with the levels a bit.
thx for the feedback guys!

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Post by paradigm001 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:23 am

Yea drums are tough to get punchy without being completelly distorted or swuased. Its in the eq too. Kick usually sits between 60 and 80 and the snare comes out at 500-600 and 1K to 2.5 K the snap on the kick is usually higher then the snare at 5K, hope that helps
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AirRake
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Post by AirRake » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:29 am

thx for the advice man i appreciate it. I'll def play around with it a bunch and hopefully it'll get polished out nice.

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Post by paradigm001 » Sun Jul 31, 2011 1:32 am

posting error forget about it.
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Re: A Melodic dubstephousish track check it out!

Post by AirRake » Mon Aug 01, 2011 1:09 am

dunno if you guys will look back at this but i updated it with some eq work and some other changes, check it out

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Re: A Melodic dubstephousish track [Updated]

Post by Decitronic » Mon Aug 01, 2011 10:50 am

Great stuff, other than what was already said I don't have much criticism! Perhaps change up the Arp rhythm the odd time like every measure have a half bar of half time arp or such so it doesn't get over bear and give a bit of room to breathe.

Overall a really enjoyable track, well done!

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