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Lowgain
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Work in progress

Post by Lowgain » Mon Aug 01, 2011 10:32 pm

Not really dubstep, but here's a track I started today and have been working on the last little while:

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http://min.us/mdR9RVx

Thinking it may be about done structure-wise and I'm looking to tighten up the mix and add some more life to what is there now, keep it interesting. Let me know what you think!
Last edited by Lowgain on Sat Aug 13, 2011 8:05 pm, edited 6 times in total.

LouisCypher
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Re: Work in progress

Post by LouisCypher » Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:33 pm

Honestly I'm not sure how to critique this as I'm not really sure what you are going for with this. Its pretty cool I guess although its pretty minimal and honestly not very exciting. I would def put some more work in on it.

Lowgain
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Re: Work in progress

Post by Lowgain » Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:59 am

Would you say its more the overall structure or a lack of variation in the parts that's making it less interesting? I'm probably gonna fiddle around and see if I can stick some more little one-off changes in and such. Overall its minimal yea, I'm not sure whether or not I want to keep it that way -

As far as the overall mix goes, anything seem off?

Lowgain
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Re: Work in progress

Post by Lowgain » Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:20 pm

Added a newer version of the track to the original post - not fully sure if I like all the vocal samples I put in or not but there is at least some more variation now.

Any thoughts?

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