My first Neurofunk Tune

[Hysterikz]

Hey guys, this is my first Neurofunk song, tell me what you think of it and I would also love some feedback on it

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[Hysterikz]

Bump. Anyone have feedback?

[wub]

Your kick/snare are weak, to the point where the bass noise kind of overpowers them, giving the track a feel of a bass patch being soundtracked by some percussion loops. Not liking the EVIL sample. When the meat of the tune kicks in at the 1m40s mark, it takes over everything else. Mixdown needs a fair bit of work to allow it to sit with the other elements.

Finally, I'd say vary the drum programming a bit after the second drop, the track just feels like a long loop at the moment.

[Hysterikz]

Your kick/snare are weak, to the point where the bass noise kind of overpowers them, giving the track a feel of a bass patch being soundtracked by some percussion loops. Not liking the EVIL sample. When the meat of the tune kicks in at the 1m40s mark, it takes over everything else. Mixdown needs a fair bit of work to allow it to sit with the other elements.

Finally, I'd say vary the drum programming a bit after the second drop, the track just feels like a long loop at the moment.

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first track in Reason and I tried to follow Dave's advice as he made his song. Either way, I learned a crapload about EQing, compressing, and the built in VSTs. I was trying to look for a good way to kick into the drop, but couldn't come up with anything, so as a last minute attempt I just used the "Evil" vocals, sorry. I'm still trying to figure out how to mix and master my tracks, I'm actually going to try out a bit of Dubstep in Reason this time around and try to incorporate a lot more information from around the forums.

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to look at my thread!