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First Dubstep Tune

Post by chrizz » Sat May 19, 2007 2:48 pm

hey,
i've just registered me so here some infos about me:
my name's chris... i'm a 15 year old boy living in germany in bielefeld.
i work with a demo version of reason (of course i'm saving money for a full version ;) ) and cubase...
here's my first tune:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/version-4-160507-mp3.html
(converted to mp3: 160 kbit/s 2,43 mb 2:08 min)


very simple and "minimalistic", please dont forget that it's just my first one... :P

thx for da comments and have a nice day!

cYa
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Post by naj » Sat May 19, 2007 4:40 pm

plz convert to mp3! 21mb ..
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Post by chrizz » Sat May 19, 2007 7:11 pm

i converted it ----> new url in the first post

cYa
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Post by naj » Sat May 19, 2007 9:01 pm

good luck in future:))
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Post by krio » Sat May 19, 2007 11:44 pm

Well first off, you need to work on your drums, make them more clear, especially snare
Second, i began to like the tune in like 1:37 with the pad in it....you should use it in the beginning also, or maybe another type of pad or something..
Third, i PERSONALLY didn't like the left-right-left-right bassline wobble...it didn't feel right...

Well i hope this helps a little, keep working on it, and don't let your head down :)
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Post by chrizz » Sun May 20, 2007 2:10 pm

Well, thx for you're help and your good wishes (@naj) :wink: !

I'm gonna edit the points you mentioned, krio!

See ya!
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Post by krio » Sun May 20, 2007 2:29 pm

Well you don't have to, 'tis just my opinion or point of view how i would have done it, cheers.
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Post by chrizz » Sun May 20, 2007 2:42 pm

it's just that i can understand most of your criticism. except of the left right wobble of course :lol:

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