Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

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Carpediem
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Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:11 am

Last edited by Carpediem on Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:21 am, edited 4 times in total.

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Barbosa1405 » Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:33 am

Like this one, powerful track, maybe a bit too compressed though, not much dynamic in there.. good work though !
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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:33 pm

Thx for the feedback dude, few things im working on still, only have a couple of months under my belt as far as making music and dubstep...but i feel like i'm getting there....so all advice and any help anyone can throw out, i would appreciate.

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Woody D » Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:32 pm

Love it mate. Fancy making it downloadable? ;)
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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Sun Aug 21, 2011 8:50 pm

Pretty soon it will be, just want a little bit more feedback. but add me on youtube or soundcloud and keep in touch =)

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Kinky » Sun Aug 21, 2011 9:04 pm

Yeah man, nice tune, it's just too cluttered. There needs to be more headroom in the track, just re-mix the whole thing. The tune's solid as fuck though, great tones, great notes, solid progression. I really like it, it's just too cluttered. :l
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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:49 pm

thx for the feedback kinky. when you say remix do you mean like tweak the patterns a bit?

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by vCookie » Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:01 am

i will download this when it's done. it just sounds a bit too tinny. tighten it up like the others have said and i'll download it

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Echomaker » Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:50 am

Loving this.

As with everyone, it's just really the mixing and mastering that needs work. Compositionally, I love it.

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by almostskate100 » Tue Aug 23, 2011 5:50 am

You got a lot of sweet melodies in here dude. One suggestion might be to vary up the drum patterns a bit. First idea that came to mind was maybe taking out some of the fast hi-hat hits for a couple bars, kinda have a breakdown section. Might give it some more impact if you slow down the hats for a bit, yaddamean?

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Tue Aug 23, 2011 6:36 am

yeah i na what chu mean

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Re: Carpe Diem - Stargazer [Dubstep]

Post by Carpediem » Tue Aug 23, 2011 7:52 pm

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