Terra - Heavy Smoke (Deep/Dark)

[TerraRiddim]

Help me out and rate this tune 1 - 10 I wanna see where you guys think I'm at
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[TerraRiddim]

Bump

[ninthy4]

8/10, I really like it at 0.30 but at 2.09 it get alittle messy I think

[TerraRiddim]

8/10, I really like it at 0.30 but at 2.09 it get alittle messy I think

Yeah with all of the reverb and delays it gets a bit cluttered and noisy, I might try to thin it out a little bit in that section ^^

[TerraRiddim]

One last bump

[darigan]

Hard to rate, I think it has the potential to be really great track, nice beat, nice bass, nice groove and apart form that middle section where its gets a little messy its really well mixed. You've got your solid 8 or 16 bar groove, I think where this track needs work is turn that couple of bars groove into a full track, the whole first section sounds fine I feel it starts to drag a little after that.

[TerraRiddim]

Hard to rate, I think it has the potential to be really great track, nice beat, nice bass, nice groove and apart form that middle section where its gets a little messy its really well mixed. You've got your solid 8 or 16 bar groove, I think where this track needs work is turn that couple of bars groove into a full track, the whole first section sounds fine I feel it starts to drag a little after that.

Thank you, some legit constructive criticism is much appreciated!

[AnomiK]

chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.

[TerraRiddim]

chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.

I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.

[AnomiK]

chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.

I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.

thanks dude. swing...so give them a better pattern to groove to?

[TerraRiddim]

chill tune, hard to rate because im not sure what the scale would even mean. as far as all other amateur producers, your right in there. you have good style & change ups & seem to be doing things right. good stuff. check out my tune in sig Big Guns & tell me whats up. peace.

I probably can't help much just because it's out of my range of style as far as production goes, I don't really make mid-range so the first thing I'd say is some more drum variation, and a bit of swing in the hi hats.

thanks dude. swing...so give them a better pattern to groove to?

Well with standard more wobble and electro bass oriented dubstep the emphasis is obviously on the kick snare nod up and down when it comes to the drums, so depending on what you're using (I produce in logic) you can either account for it by had or quantize the notes with some natural latency to them that ends up really adding to the back and forth movement of the track

[xx773xx]

Yeah the delayed keys/pad gets a little muddy with everything else, but other than that, it is a damn neat track to groove to. EQ some of the harsh stuff out of the feedback and it should be sounding sick. I love the Cheech & Chong sample with the awkward silence in the middle before the messy bit. Cool stuff man!

8/10.

[TerraRiddim]

Yeah the delayed keys/pad gets a little muddy with everything else, but other than that, it is a damn neat track to groove to. EQ some of the harsh stuff out of the feedback and it should be sounding sick. I love the Cheech & Chong sample with the awkward silence in the middle before the messy bit. Cool stuff man!

8/10.

Much appreciated man, I'll definitely try to do that when I'm working on the final mastering! By the way I plan on throwing this tracks mastered version as well as some other remasters and brand new tunes up for DL on my soundcloud after I get up to 200 followers if you'd care to help me Big ups everybody

[Barbosa1405]

Like the tune , not sure where i would put on a scale of 1-10, but like it and nice bass sound ! second drop isnt what is should be for the first part though, does get a bit messy....

let me know what you think, of this one :
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