Paradigm- Human Error Song

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Sep 12, 2011 12:23 am

Soundcloud

anybody care to give me some criticism or feedback? I could use it.

DJ Sampletank · Post by **DJ Sampletank** » Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:13 pm

Hey man, enjoyed that, only thing I'd suggest is maybe cleaning up a little at the heavy part, I dunno, maybe its the crap setup on this pc but it sounds a bit muddy. I really like it though, the notes, the layout and the mix seems good too.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Sep 12, 2011 5:49 pm

Yea thanks man, I have to go clean it up a little.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:59 pm

uploaded a new version without the beg synth muddying up the bass section. I think the snare might be to big...hmm snare might be too loud too? Help me out

medjwa · Post by **medjwa** » Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:19 pm

Haha this reminds me of Transformers. Sounds awesome, though.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:48 am

thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?

IC0N · Post by **IC0N** » Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:43 am

I feel like a lower pitched snare along with the reverb you have might fit a little better overall. It might just be my opinion but it sounds like the snare and reverb sticks out alot.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:48 pm

yea your right, thats what Im struggling with. Ive tried lots of snares, I think im gonna back off the verb and lower the snare, Im gonna post an update soon.

medjwa · Post by **medjwa** » Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:00 am

paradigm001 wrote:thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?

Haha only the movie man. I've never heard the tune before. Who's it by?

DJ Sampletank · Post by **DJ Sampletank** » Thu Sep 15, 2011 3:59 pm

Hey dude sounds badass. I like the snare, it's different from the norm. Hit me up when you get this one finished.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:52 am

Soundcloud

This one I changed the snare, which one is better?

IC0N · Post by **IC0N** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:54 pm

I like the new snare more than the first.

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 5:18 pm

Thanks icon, did you read DJ Sample Tanks response? He said what he liked about the track was the snare! Im gonna have to make two versions of this tune. Each with a different snare. One will be a DJ Sampletank exclusive with the old loud snare.

thanks again

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 9:45 pm

medjwa wrote:
paradigm001 wrote:thanks! Trasformers the movie or the tune?
Haha only the movie man. I've never heard the tune before. Who's it by?

i dunno theres different versions floating around there, I heard a DJ one night mix in some transformer samples and I think thats what sound I was hearing.
Anyway check this guy out. His tune isint bad.

http://youtu.be/VyCznbIlxwo

aboley5 · Post by **aboley5** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm

Fuck man that's awsome. I just posted mine. Put it to shame ahaha

aboley5 · Post by **aboley5** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm

Fuck man that's awsome. I just posted mine. Put it to shame ahaha

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:15 pm

update
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paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Sat Sep 17, 2011 1:24 pm

updateSoundcloud

here I have it untill the second drop. I want the second drop to be nuts.

tdmrecords · Post by **tdmrecords** » Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:53 pm

Hi

I represent TDM Records I would be interested in hearing more of your music.

please email demo@tdmrecords.co.uk

www.soundcloud.com/tdmrecords

we do dnb and dubstep as well as other music

facebook

http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100002067805116

thanks

steve @ TDM

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:31 am

thanks

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