WIPs/unfinished tunes for feedback * no finished tunes *

[skyh]

@teknian ... damn dude that tune is heavy... koan sound said he liked it... thats great right there!

[FruitFlesh]

@ JTL, emeli sand breaking the law - I really liked your tune - I'm not a pro at all, I don't even know what I'm doing a lot of the time :S but the rules says I have to write feedback... Just wanna say around the 2.29 mark (the break) it goes a little bit too quiet in that bit. Other than that it's soo nice, just needs turning up a bit louder in that part that's all.

@ Skyhigh - Moonlight Draft 2. Really cool, can totally imagine dancing to this in a club! I think you could totally add some vocals (like reggae or tribal style if that makes sense?) on the outro, it would give it some variety.

@ Rejinx - Not sure, sounds more like the chords you are using =/? Maybe take it down an octave, or go dischordant.

@ dj Cappa - did you delete your wip?

@ Riich - Great track, I'd honestly love to hear that drop come in a bit sooner!

Ok, so here's mine, been pouring my time into this lately... (relationships and production don't mix as he said *sigh*) so I've been working on my own stuff. Think I'm going nuts, it's a bit more DnB but not sure how to make it sound good and more dubstep so any feedback would be really appreciated.

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[_boring]

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110bpm DARK.

[Standby]

@Dataloss like the idea of it. but i don't like the wobble or its panning. maybe make it a bit grittier and have it feature in the tune a bit less. like it though.

@JTL fuck knows what happened. i had a look and no ones was working...nice track. sounds like the main bass synth is masking some elements. love the sample, maybe push it up a bit in the mix though. let it come through some more. oh shit love the drum switch up. nice. new favourite.

@Wizeguy Brap!

@decontruct this could be sick. really not a fan of the drum samples you've used though. change them up a bit. bongos/congas are nice though. drop would be heavy if it was actually heavier. not sure how but there is definitely some energy lost. really like it though. sample's are cool

BRAND NEW WIP
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[Standby]

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tune is sick but leave at least 3 people feedback before posting yours

[skyh]

@FruitFlesh, thanks for the kind words! Your tune is kind of cool... I feel like it needs a lot more space though, too many droning notes.

[Zerbexian]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0kU-8-Gitk8

Not sure if I'm finished, want feedback / tips on how to make it better (I'm using FL Studio)

[JTL]

@wizeguy Writing as I listen. Like the perc here, lovely use of reverb. All it needs to my ears is some variation (like you said some pads). It's a roller but it could do with some melody, there's no hook as of yet. But wow it rolls hard. Nice sub. I want the finished product mate!

@dataloss reviewing as i listen. Like that opening synth. Nice reverb on the snare. The wobbled synth needs to be layered on a sub of some sort it's far too thin. Also perhaps some reverb on it, there's not enough decay.. imo. This is a cool little jam man, repost with more.

@cappa your tune wouldnt load for me man.

@skyhigh CARRRNIVAL tings. Like this but it's just pretty repetitive. Not sure I like your lead bass synth. (The higher one is great). Maybe a vocal? Shabba ranks or some shit. would be ILL! Nice groove though, just not digging that mid overdriven style synth. Grates my ears.

@Fruitflesh thanks for the feedback! Reviewing yours as I type, Intro is a little bland. Quite like the synths you've got there, not sure about the quick arpeggiated synth.. Hi hats are far too loud. Try changing the velocity between them. Wow that's a nice lead bass synth, layer it with a sub. The Kick is a little loud but a great sample, also I'm clipping when you layer the other kick on top. Need to stop your mix. Also no snare?:( Think this could be decent, need to sort out your mix. Keep going don't give up!

@zerbexian Leave us some feedback and we'll leave you some mate

@those that have given me feedback, thank you very much, ONE QUESTION: Is the Sub FAR too low? Does the whole thing sound majorly tinny/ridiculously trebly? Or does it just need thickening up a little bit? (I'm on headphones so sounds ok here, (need to get some new monitors!))

Would appreciate feedback from those of you who haven't had a listen yet, please do! Thanks dudes. Peace!

Here's my WIP:

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[dj Cappa]

since everyones saying my tune wont load heres the link
http://soundcloud.com/djcappa/untitled-really-rough-wip

[hfr]

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nice intro, whats that movie called again? I think you could add a little more subbass, but overall it sounds great. like the "grunchy" synth a lot!

[hfr]

Ok, so here's mine, been pouring my time into this lately... (relationships and production don't mix as he said *sigh*) so I've been working on my own stuff. Think I'm going nuts, it's a bit more DnB but not sure how to make it sound good and more dubstep so any feedback would be really appreciated.

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i like the overall idea of the track, but after 1:50 the kick is hitting way too hard for my taste! also you should turn down the high hats as well, maybe add some reverb to them.

[hfr]

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Been working on this for a while... I'd love to hear what you guys think!

sick drums! totaly love the first drop, crazy sound!

[hfr]

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latest work in progress... i felt like building some tunes after outlook this year

any kind of feedback much appreciated!

[Lysergical]

@JTL

I really the dig the vocals on this track man. Drums sound a bit weak though, try some parallel compression maybe? The drop lacks some sub as well.

@-boring

dark stuff man, reminds me of stuff that being released a couple years back. no complains really, besides that the high hats are a bit piercing for my tastes. dig the sample @ 1:19

@riich

soundin pretty good on my hd280s. love that bit at 1:30. drums don't sound bad either. hats could use some reverb

here's my wip

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[Zerbexian]

@JTL - Love the vocals, makes the track sound very compact ^^

@dj Cappa - It's a nice idea you got there, but the drop should be a bit louder/harder

@ninthy4 - Nice intro :O I also love the drop, it's really filthy and blowed me away




Here's my song, actually I want tips on how to make it better ^^ (using FL studio)

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[Mixe3y]

how about this one?
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[pavvel]

Something new from me, any comments appreciated

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[ninthy4]

Mixe3y and pavvel, please give feedback to atleast 3 people before asking for comments next time

Lysergical good intro, liking these melodies and synths! When the drop kicks in I find the frequencies fighting with eachother if you know what I mean, it easily gets muddy. Keep it up!
hfr intresting intro, good dark vibes. Maybe give the kick some more punch? Snare sounds good, good amount of reverb. Bass is dark, but I would add some more lowpass filter on it and a sub sinewave, to give it a somewhat Loefah type of sound.
Standby Yes. Loving this. Top notch percussion work and that string sample works really well. Fat acid bass. Snare and kick is perfect. Sick tune! Looking forward to the finished product

An update, dont hence the shit mastering, it's just to give the clip some more volume, bad idea really. Anyway, enjoy
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[deafblindmusic]

Evenin' all, been a while since I posted anything, but first, feedback;

@skyhigh : "Moonlight" : Digging the Moombahton vibe. I really like this track actually, the only criticism is the off-the-beat stab that comes in around 1:20 or so lacks some definition or enough interest (for my ear anyway). Great work!

@fruitflesh : "On My Mind" : Boards Of Canada string pattern at beginning Like the syncopated electro tom sound, think you could explore the pattern a little more. The first drop is a little weak, there's no bassline sub, or anything. I'd turn the hats down a tad.

@standby : "Fractal WIP" : Oldschool jungle vibes on the intro, love it. When things start moving it's definitely a headnodder, the hat pattern has a lovely swing to it. Almost house, almost techno, almost...I dunno, but I really like this track. Would work really well in a downtempo mix. Nice progression of elements and plenty of interest. Get it finished!

@JTL : "Breaking the Law" : Loving the percussion work, interesting. The only criticism is the first drop, whilst really good, the slow attack on the lead bass line is stealing energy from it. Snare needs a little more snap (or my ears could be wrecked after working on the thing I am about to post *grin*). Like the little vocal FX etc. Get it finished

@lysergical :"RMXWIP" : Like that stab sound, interesting synth pattern. It's kinda taking over the whole mix though.

@Zerbexian : "Machines" : Noisy, funky. The sub is totally buried though, you probably should look at the EQ you have in play. The 4/4 transition is interesting. I'd look into pulling some elements out before the 2nd breakdown to give you room to re-introduce them back. Would help the drop.

@Mixe3y : "Cabrakan" : Filthy, and kinda scary. Like stereo effects on the lead. And the crash cymbal work on the percussion.

@ninthy4 : "Wipe Out" : Been following the progression of this track for a while actually,like the progression and the soundscaping. Lots of space around everything, and the little drum fills are wicked too. Your reeses as always are on point. Going to be a bad track when finished.

And with that. Here's my latest noise. I'm not too sure about it to be honest, but comments very appreciated (if you could make em on Soundcloud that's cool too). This has had zero mixdown attention, I've been working on headphones all night, so please forgive the inconsistencies

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[KillerKat]

Thread still popping? MY tune: