Bobtales - Azza

chazzzza · Post by **chazzzza** » Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:48 pm

Soundcloud

comments would be nice.

OllieScott · Post by **OllieScott** » Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:00 pm

i suggest learning some music theory, learn some scales, chords etc. Definitely will help improve your music

TheTomster · Post by **TheTomster** » Mon Sep 26, 2011 10:34 pm

OllieScott wrote:i suggest learning some music theory, learn some scales, chords etc. Definitely will help improve your music

This. None of those notes flow together to be honest. You're sound seems to be nice and clean, so I'd suggest just revising your note arrangement.

DazeL · Post by **DazeL** » Mon Sep 26, 2011 10:36 pm

Not gonna lie this song kind of bored me it seemed very repetitive, in your defense though I like the pop style of song construction (with catchy riffs and drops). Not bad for your first song though, might just want to work on the balancing, like that sound at 0:30 could stand be a little softer, as well as the piano, they seem to just pop out there, as opposed to blending with the song. Also, the piano part could use a little reverb I'd say, keep up the good work though hope you enjoy making music I still remember my first song!

paradigm001 · Post by **paradigm001** » Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:13 pm

might wanna learn some music theory like someone said. The synth that comes in is really harsh too. But the piano is out of tune!
Keep it up though. Definitelly learn your keys and scales though. I say that with the utmost respect. Music comes first and your notes are clashing.

wub · Post by **wub** » Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:14 am

Your title has been edited as per this thread - http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=214035

Bobtales - Azza

Bobtales - Azza

Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is

Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is

Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is

Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is

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