Rysoserious - Cinema Nightmare

[Rysoserious]

Hey guys. Just made an account today on here, and just recently started dabbling in EDM producing this past month. Basically I learned here and there through online tutorials and experimentation, and analyzing commercial tracks more closely while creating this WiP mix as my first project. I'm happy with the sounds used, but feel the overall mixing and mastering isn't nearly finished. I am still clueless as to go about mixing and mastering, other than using my ear to adjust volume levels and add slight effects. I'm also iffy with sub bass. My apologies if this sounds goofy on certain sound systems, as I don't exactly have proper monitors and such yet, but only cheap headphones and desktop speakers. So any feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks!

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[Rysoserious]

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[daeMTHAFKNkim]

the main part is the only part that sounds good in my opinion. the sounds you have really remind me of zomboy. good stuff. if you don't mind sharing those sounds I'll highly appreciate it!

[STML]

I agree with daeMTHAFKNkim - the intro sounds a little mundane. Maybe have a different drum track with some different samples or something.
That would also add more punch to the drop. But if you've only been producing for a month very good job.