Asetik - Beelzebub

[asetik]

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[snypadub]

That intro, rimshot type hit is too weak. Try to give it some reverb and perhaps add some other hats.

The kick drum: Beef it up, it isn't nearly as punchy as it should be, looses all interest without some low end to it.

The bass is too simple and gets tedious. The snare has too much low on the reverb and sounds too forced.
Try and play around with your bass pattern and Get those oscilators working for you. Not sure I like the pad that comes in half way through, sounds a little out of place.

Just add some variation to your track, It should be like a good story with a coherent beginning, middle and end. Yours has a weak beginning that makes the middle sound flat (the middle is too repetitive without any progression) and it ends abruptly.

nice try, keep practising and it will get better.

[Triphosphate]

This has the potential to be a really sick chillout track. I agree with everything said above about the rim shot, and kick. The orchestra hits are totally off key though, try raising it 3 semitones. Also that wobble would sound sick with a alittle more harmonic content, and when the orchestra hits come in the wobbles should probably get a high register added on, maybe 7th or even a whole octave.

Check out my latest if you have the chance, it would be greatly appreciated.
http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=220033

[NiBirucollision]

tight dud, im diggin the sound of that wobble--its kinda simple sounding-but dank im vibin it check my new track n tell m wat u think

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[asetik]

Thanks for the feedback guys. Im trying to improve my sound and any criticism is top-notch.

[Triphosphate]

Anytime man. My knowledge is limited, and we all can always learn and improve more, if you have any questions, though, feel free to PM me.