Hi guys, this track is something I have been working on, on and off. It's influenced by all the music I know and love from my childhood, from fantasy games and movies and such. I tried to create and uplifting atmosphere by keeping the instrument amounts low, adding reverb, delay etc and using the right notes too.
All feedback/critique etc is valued and taken in.
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Hope (Deep/atmospheric/fantasy)
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- DJ Sampletank
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ZimmermanStudios
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Re: Hope (Deep/atmospheric/fantasy)
Your intro could be more rhythmically interesting. Piano is low in the mix. Pretty bare sounding white noise snare, maybe layer that. Automate some filters or something on that pad to keep interest. Needs some hihats and aux percussion. The ending is kind of awkward.
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Re: Hope (Deep/atmospheric/fantasy)
Sup man, yeah I see what you mean about the intro man, gonna address that. When you say piano, do you mean the stabs? Yeah I don't really like the snare either, but I left it for this WIP version. Yeah I agree about filters/percussion etc.
Thanks a bunch man.
Anyone else got any critique/feedback?
Cheers guys.
Thanks a bunch man.
Anyone else got any critique/feedback?
Cheers guys.
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ZimmermanStudios
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Re: Hope (Deep/atmospheric/fantasy)
yeah I was talking about the stabs. Have 'em on the off beat or something, not just right there with everything on the kick
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Re: Hope (Deep/atmospheric/fantasy)
Nice idea man, never thought of that.ZimmermanStudios wrote:yeah I was talking about the stabs. Have 'em on the off beat or something, not just right there with everything on the kick
Will be doing a new version in the coming days, so any feedback / critique would rock, cheers guys.
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