kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:42 am

hi

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'ppreciate some feedback on this one!!!

thanks all and ill feedback back if you want

TURN YOUR SPEAKERS UP

Tino_Be_Like · Post by **Tino_Be_Like** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:34 am

Its koo nice dub mix... sounds like something you'd hear on an anime about wolves stalking a blood thirsty raven in the woods lol

DJ Sampletank · Post by **DJ Sampletank** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:06 pm

Tino_Be_Like wrote:Its koo nice dub mix... sounds like something you'd hear on an anime about wolves stalking a blood thirsty raven in the woods lol

Does have a bit of an anime feel.

Yeah man really liked this track, except the intro seems a little dragged out, could be shorter. Sampling is bang on and in the right place, which adds to the atmosphere. And I love the atmosphere created in this track.

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:58 pm

hey dj sampletank

took that into consideration and shortened the intro and boosted the volume a little bit
some minor tweaking was done

new version is in first post

ZimmermanStudios · Post by **ZimmermanStudios** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:04 pm

Really good reverb here. The main riff starts to feel a little empty about halfway through it, maybe use some more automation to keep it interesting. This is worlds ahead of most of the stuff on this forum though, good vibes.

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:35 pm

ZimmermanStudios wrote:Really good reverb here. The main riff starts to feel a little empty about halfway through it, maybe use some more automation to keep it interesting. This is worlds ahead of most of the stuff on this forum though, good vibes.

i appreciate the kind words

are you talking about the oscillating sub or the occasional low pass reese?

i kept sub the same to really push that minimal feeling but i'll definitely consider changing it up for future tracks

love the feedback and if you got anything you want commented on or feedback just lemme kno!

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:15 pm

anyone else? im really likin this style probably gonna amp it up for the next work tho
moar feedback plox

DJ Sampletank · Post by **DJ Sampletank** » Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:17 pm

Yeah dude thats nice, intro's just long enough. Really like this track.
And if your giving out free feedback, then feel free to hit up my soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/dj-sampletank

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:28 am

DJ Sampletank wrote:Yeah dude thats nice, intro's just long enough. Really like this track.
And if your giving out free feedback, then feel free to hit up my soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/dj-sampletank

thanks man

yeah dude i checked out the first 2 on yours

i want to help you out so here's my advice plain and simple: start getting creative with your synthesis and drums. start layering in some sub bass especially if youre going to label it as dubstep. you NEED that sub somewhere man and the track seems light without it. there are so many good threads in the production forum that could make your stuff sound better even if you only read a couple. it's a great place

stranger_sounds · Post by **stranger_sounds** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:49 am

Very good production, i like it - especially the percussion some nice sounds there. You got the atmosphere sorted.
As far as suggestions go, I think it gets a bit boring after the second drop, it would benefit from something new being added in around here. Maybe some subtle pads or synth stabs. I like the pad you bring in towards the end at about the 5 minute mark, maybe bring it in sooner.
Nice style anyway, I'm just starting to produce more of this kind of thing myself!

kiene · Post by **kiene** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:27 am

stranger_sounds wrote:Very good production, i like it - especially the percussion some nice sounds there. You got the atmosphere sorted.
As far as suggestions go, I think it gets a bit boring after the second drop, it would benefit from something new being added in around here. Maybe some subtle pads or synth stabs. I like the pad you bring in towards the end at about the 5 minute mark, maybe bring it in sooner.
Nice style anyway, I'm just starting to produce more of this kind of thing myself!

yes ive been getting "it's boring" a lot
definitely going to take this down and change some shit

particle-jim · Post by **particle-jim** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 10:34 am

really diggin this one man, that sub is tasty

brasco · Post by **brasco** » Fri Oct 21, 2011 8:41 pm

particle-jim wrote:really diggin this one man, that sub is tasty

knobgoblin · Post by **knobgoblin** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:53 am

I really like this track. I bet it sounds godly on a huge sound system. I does feel like the first half is a bit drawn out, like it could use more variations or possibly just another subdued background texture to help keep the suspense high until the drop. Mix is really nice, quiet, but thats not a bad thing for this style at all.

Liquistik · Post by **Liquistik** » Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:17 pm

Good vibes man, loving them sounds!

Check out mine if y'have time. It's minimal dark, my first try and minimal dubstep. See what y'think

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Cheers,

Aaron.

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