House Tunes Feedback?

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House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:58 pm

Alright peoples,

Got a couple new tracks I was looking for some feedback on. I have posted in the Feedback forum before but got shot down because 'yo fam der iz not nuff wub wub'.

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Also does anyone know what kind of labels these would maybe fit on? The only one that came to mind is FutureBoogie?

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:15 pm

Anyone?!

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by hutyluty » Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:33 pm

its decent, really good production in there, the drums and bass are really good but i think you need a tad more melodic content, it all sounds a bit haphazard and the actual synths sound quite plain and dry. Maybe add some vocal cuts as well?

ps. its the same tune twice :mrgreen:
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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Sat Nov 19, 2011 4:56 pm

Hahaha how did I not notice that?! Big up Huty....pretty on point with the feedback. Tried to avoid vocals chops on this one as I seem to put it on everything!

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Sat Nov 19, 2011 4:59 pm

P.S. The other track was meant to be this:

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by Ayatollah » Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:53 pm

Huty pretty much nailed it. Very nice production-wise, but you should work more on your synths. they sound really dry and on top of that kinda random, like you just threw them in there. I like the vocal sample in the second one.

I also feel that the beat could do with some more swing, but that's just cos I like to garage everything up.

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:08 pm

Hi Ayatollah cheers for taking the time out to listen and comment. Always a massive help.

Just curious as to what you mean by dry?

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:10 pm

And also what you would suggest to make it less dry?

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by Ayatollah » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:36 pm

Basically I mean that it kinda sounds straight off the synth. You could try putting on some reverb, eq it, maybe some delay on the first one, just play with several effects until you like the end result.

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Sun Nov 20, 2011 10:01 pm

Hmmm ok..... they are definitely played with. But probably not enough..... Yeah ok I see your point. Were just talking about the first one though right? As the second one I definately had a big old fiddle with!

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by Ayatollah » Mon Nov 21, 2011 3:27 pm

I was talking mostly about the first one yes...

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Re: House Tunes Feedback?

Post by MineOurArc » Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:13 pm

Cheers fella, once again thanks for taking the time out, and Huty, really really helpful.

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