Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

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Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by naahmmm » Tue Nov 22, 2011 9:53 pm

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Re: Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by Refuzed » Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:30 am

needs more percussion and some sort of lead. the bass is repetitive, needs some switch ups man
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Re: Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by naahmmm » Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:53 am

Refuzed wrote:needs more percussion and some sort of lead. the bass is repetitive, needs some switch ups man

i want to keep it this minimalistic, but i'm going to rework the bass, thanks!

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Post by Refuzed » Wed Nov 23, 2011 12:46 pm

of course i did think about not sending that last post as i understand you want it minimal, but you can still make it minimal with some percussion and a melody of some sort
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Re: Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by jeanblanc » Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:59 pm

I agree with Refuzed, I think there is potential if you create a good lead and also add more changes/bits of variety to the track. I appreciate you're trying to be minimalistic, but I think that in that case it is even more important that every element of the track is really strong in its own right and creates interest through subtle changes. Hope that helps a bit and keep going with it.

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Re: Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by fiveone » Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:29 pm

i like the concept and ideas you've got laid out and it could sound like a banger if yeah, there was a more defined drum pattern in there, along with a better synth. personally that synth sounded way out and too amateurish, but that's not to say i didn't enjoy the rest of it. the bass sounds heavy and clean but needs something other than just wobbles throughout the whole track. reminds me of the beginning of loefah's remix of "monsoon".
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Re: Hoden Hans - Synopsis (Deep&Minimalistic)

Post by naahmmm » Thu Nov 24, 2011 12:55 pm

Well thanks a lot for the Feedback guys, i will rework on this tune in the next days... I'll give you an update if it's done!

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