yes and no.icanicant wrote:Cheers man. Really appreciate it. Yeah I definitely think I am gonna cut down the intro.vulvavibration wrote:think again of the intro - a lot of people tend to do way too long intros that aren't really needed. don't be scared to dive into a tune quicker. (that's just my 5p anyway)icanicant wrote:2nd attempt at doing a song. Would appreciate some ninja constructive criticism because I got zero from the dubs section
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i like those claplike sounds are really spot on.
nice rythm. nice athmosphere you're building.
after the second drop - that sound on the top opens up the spectrum a lot - well done - but am i right with my feeling that it's panned slightly to the left?
i didn't check back with my monitors, but that doesn't matter a lot as it's anyway 'just' a soundcloud-compressed link. but take care of your sub. it ///might/// be a bit too loud.
good one - good idea.
keep on
Yes that sound is panned, does that matter? I thought it was good to have different sounds panned at different places?
this sound isn't actually moving also it's not really in a room - it sounds more as if it's 2-dimensional.
try paning it slightly from left to right and back - just slightly.
right now i'm just hearing this sond on the left much louder than on the right and there is no equialent frequency that matches on the other side.
hope it helps - my english is horirble when it comes down to being precise.

