ReachZenith - Silent Night (Holiday/Dubstep)

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ReachZenith - Silent Night (Holiday/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:37 am

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Any feedback please :dunce: , I'll return the favor just let me know where to go!
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by dj_artery » Thu Dec 01, 2011 10:32 am

Hiya mate. I mean no disrespect when I say this, but I do find it aurally confusing: Not quite sure what to make of it lol. Think I may be right in saying the bass lines a semitone out @1:21, would deffinateley get that seen to prior to finalizing it (can hear a few other instances). Maybe 'blag' a santa sample/record one yourself? ;-) I would like to change the h@'s so they groove a bit better: Have the first four 16th notes then switch to an open h@ on the off beat, and repeat the 16th just before the snare hit?

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ChEEzin » Thu Dec 01, 2011 3:21 pm

I like the idea of doing silent night as dubstep! :)

1:20-1:47- Possibly change up the hi-hat a bit! Also, I enjoyed that little part at 2:07-2:10

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:24 pm

Thanks guys appreciate the feedback. I'll look at these things and see what I can do! Thanks again!

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ToneSmiff » Thu Dec 01, 2011 4:40 pm

this came out cool as hell. i'm not an expert in giving advice as i'm new to the game, but i do agree with the hi hat change up, however, i like how you lead into the drop. great idea and overall sound!

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Thu Dec 01, 2011 7:58 pm

Thanks a lot man. I'll be reposting tonight with some updates.

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Fri Dec 02, 2011 5:26 am

Updated the track a bit more. Things I did: Changed the Sub-Bass line a bit...EQed the Snare and basslines a bit more...Took out all pitchbends in my basslines...and mixed up the hi-hat arrangement in the first drop. Let me know how it sounds and any further changes I can make to it.

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Fri Dec 02, 2011 10:43 pm

Bump

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by paradigm001 » Sat Dec 03, 2011 12:12 am

sounds allright to me allthough, the chords dont seem to match up to the basses. They seem to go out of pitch I dont know why. They sound a semi tone off, Id look into that.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Sat Dec 03, 2011 1:08 am

Thanks. I thought I fixed that but I guess I didn't. I'll go back and figure that out.

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by paradigm001 » Sat Dec 03, 2011 3:19 am

i def would solo them
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Sat Dec 03, 2011 4:38 am

What do you mean by solo them?

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Sun Dec 04, 2011 6:23 am

Updated a bit more. I think I finally fixed the note problem, I also EQed my snare more! Woohoo for updates!

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by paradigm001 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:16 am

sounds alot better reach
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by paradigm001 » Sun Dec 04, 2011 7:19 am

that vocal sound is a tad loud and hot in some places other then that the production is good.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Sun Dec 04, 2011 9:49 am

Thanks man, glad to hear that. I'll look at that tomorrow, in too tired now haha

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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (Holiday/Dubstep)

Post by ReachZenith » Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:33 am

Quick re-bump.

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