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ReachZenith - Silent Night (Holiday/Dubstep)
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ReachZenith - Silent Night (Holiday/Dubstep)
Last edited by ReachZenith on Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Hiya mate. I mean no disrespect when I say this, but I do find it aurally confusing: Not quite sure what to make of it lol. Think I may be right in saying the bass lines a semitone out @1:21, would deffinateley get that seen to prior to finalizing it (can hear a few other instances). Maybe 'blag' a santa sample/record one yourself?
I would like to change the h@'s so they groove a bit better: Have the first four 16th notes then switch to an open h@ on the off beat, and repeat the 16th just before the snare hit?
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
I like the idea of doing silent night as dubstep! 
1:20-1:47- Possibly change up the hi-hat a bit! Also, I enjoyed that little part at 2:07-2:10
1:20-1:47- Possibly change up the hi-hat a bit! Also, I enjoyed that little part at 2:07-2:10
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Thanks guys appreciate the feedback. I'll look at these things and see what I can do! Thanks again!
Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
this came out cool as hell. i'm not an expert in giving advice as i'm new to the game, but i do agree with the hi hat change up, however, i like how you lead into the drop. great idea and overall sound!
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Thanks a lot man. I'll be reposting tonight with some updates.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Updated the track a bit more. Things I did: Changed the Sub-Bass line a bit...EQed the Snare and basslines a bit more...Took out all pitchbends in my basslines...and mixed up the hi-hat arrangement in the first drop. Let me know how it sounds and any further changes I can make to it.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
sounds allright to me allthough, the chords dont seem to match up to the basses. They seem to go out of pitch I dont know why. They sound a semi tone off, Id look into that.
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Thanks. I thought I fixed that but I guess I didn't. I'll go back and figure that out.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
i def would solo them
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Updated a bit more. I think I finally fixed the note problem, I also EQed my snare more! Woohoo for updates!
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
sounds alot better reach
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
that vocal sound is a tad loud and hot in some places other then that the production is good.
...wanna collab? Im down for new sounds, send me a PM please.
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Re: ReachZenith - Silent Night (WIP/Dubstep)
Thanks man, glad to hear that. I'll look at that tomorrow, in too tired now haha
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