Sweet Vox - A one-minute bitspeek test

[Sonic Arts]

Alright so I'm trying out another style of music again and came up with this one minute clip. I want to expand it, but I'm not really sure where to go with it. I figured I could get some creative help from some forum members. I can't really imagine a smooth way to get it to build tension. Yeah, it's a pretty open ended question, I know. If you listen to it and any ideas or criticisms come to mind please do share
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Also, I'd be willing to send out stems or something if someone wants to mess with it on their own.

[rhek]

Really nice melodic elements. Everything fits nicely. Drums could be a bit punchier and a few edits would be nice .

[Sonic Arts]

why thank you sir. yeah listened to it a few more times in the car and I think the clap could use some work. Probably try to get the vox to be more bassy too, although maybe its just my car speakers that make them seem more empty.