Finished Tunes For Feedback - Nov/Dec 2011

[Darj]

@ audioperversion : Some good ideas in it but i'm not a big fan of your synths. Your kick needs more EQing, it disappears when the bass comes.

@Kotu : Nice progression on the track. It maybe sounds a bit messy on the end, but you must dig that idea, there's good things in it.

@Airgonaut : Very progressive and chill. Some nice things, but the sub is missing . Your kick is too cut, your snare is way too far in the mix, but the delayed lead is awesome. Nice compositions & melodies.

@ S1NTH3TIC : Futurstic sounds, nice glitchy things. Your " Oi " like synth is not fitting to me. Nice drums. Good overall

@ itsdeadpool : Really nice synth and modulations, maybe some high ends could be cut. There's one thing I have to say on your track : Your kick and snare need more space. That's the only thing going bad, they are really low.

@Arvis : 60 second is short for a finished track, finish it first :p

@Dailow : Your ride / crash is piercing my ears, its too loud to me. The kick is too low, but there's nices synths. You maybe need some reggea chords to improve rythmic on this track ( just a suggestion ).

@Dj Jäger : nice tune, nothing else to say on it ( thats a good thing ).

@stranger_sounds : Garage like tune. Pretty good overall, i like these vocals. Sub is fine, keep it up.

@Sunshaft : Good ideas on this track, you to improve mixdown now. I like when drums are " loud ", i mean when you can clearly hear them. Your hats are a bit too low to.


10 feedback... My time now One more deep & dark tune, hope you gonna like it : Soundcloud
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[kolorize]

@antman put more groove/feeling to the drums maybe some shuffle? I like bass sound, but it would be nice if it will have some breaks for "air" and more lower frequencies
@Darj I saw you like drums in the front, but there is to less of bass and tracks seams to be weaker because of that.
@Sonika nice melody of vocal, I would add harmonies to this (higher and lower) and put some distortion on 3:06 and make drums bigger with EQ and Reverb - i like bit in this moment
@Dj Jäger My favourite tracks here, great. Maybe you could EQ master to get out a little bit of highs on "atari" synths


Electro/Rock/Dubstep inspired - hard to tell. BTW is not in English - you could guess what language is that
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[orangeapplesauce]

kolorize- I love it, its like the 80's set in the future europe. rocking sythns. the drums sound kinda cheesy at some points but it just adds the the 80s vibe that i crave.

Darj - I love the minimalism of the intro, the space adds to the deep feel. this reminds me of mafia. phat attack on those bass PHats!

audioperversion - the vocal sample is hot, the drums got boring for me, and the sythns were a little in my face.

Itsdeadpool - those are some gun samples all right, I like the drop. the bass is pretty filthy but its kinda hurt if that makes any sense. love the vibes i got off it thou chills up my spine.

kotu - Film score, interesting concept. but i want more brass and wind sections


Here's My freshly finished Dub Piece

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U N E A R T H

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[Darj]

Read rules.

[DEAZEL355]

Letting Go

Made a few years back and I still like it now just because I find it really catchy! Tried to make a very dark intro but not too heavy of a drop.

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F**k You

Dark and simple format, didnt want to overcrowd it with loads of synths and basslines. Just wanted to make a barebones dubstep track

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[Comfi]

Guys, leave feedback for at least three other tunes before asking for feedback on your own!

[neenjahbrand0]

This is my first submission I call it Bomb, it's nasty bass dubstep. please give some feedback


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[neenjahbrand0]

Sorry off topic but I cant find how to post a reply to a particular person, and cant find a help menu. If someone could reply and show me the way Id appreciate thanks

[orangeapplesauce]

This is my first submission I call it Bomb, it's nasty bass dubstep. please give some feedback


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I get it your new, but seriously post some freakin feedback or no one is gonna give a shit about your tune.

[Swaggr]

@Darj thats pretty cool, pretty mellow i dig it :3
@Kotu I could imagine a good remix coming out of this one not bad on its own aswell, pretty original
@itsdeadpool Heavyyyy brah, fucking love it, thats a perfect snare right there aswell

Heres one i recently finished, might get it mastered better in the near future, but have a listen :3
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[xjb]

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finally got something finished....

[xjb]

orangeapplesauce: dub bit, i think it needs more bass and maybe a bit more substance to the snare, less reverb maybe? but the melodies and rhythms are tight

darj. needs more sub and i think maybe simplify the kickpattern a bit?

kolorize. is crazy 80s electro rock, not entirely sure what to make of that, think it just needs a fattening up a bit. is it your band and do you play live??

[itsdeadpool]

@Darj: Production is on point my man, great quality!

@Kalorize: haha that tune is funky! not exactly my style but a cool song, definetly has an 80's vibe like orangeapplesauce said

@orangeapplesauce: haha dude this song is fucking sick, i feel like i should be out in cali with a fat blunt

@swaggr: your tunes showed up as currently not available so i couldnt listen

@xjb: that tune is dirtier than a cucumber in a womens prison! love the modulation on that reese and the overall melody, great work dude

heres my latest remix for Mark Instinct's "Off The Chain", thanks for listening!

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[Swaggr]

yeah had some problems with reuploading it :< it should be back up tonight though

[Comfi]

POST SOME WELL THOUGHT OUT FEEDBACK ON THREE TRACKS IN THIS THREAD BEFORE REQUESTING FEEDBACK ON YOUR OWN

IF YOU DON'T, NOT ONLY WILL YOU NOT GET FEEDBACK, BUT BECAUSE THIS THREAD IS HERE ON A TRIAL BASIS, YOU MAY KILL THE WHOLE THING AND THE WORLD WILL EX-MUTHAFUCKIN-PLODE.

[Swaggr]

its up again! thats fuuuuckin massive btw deadpool, do you use massive?
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its more of a progressive track, had fun making this one :3

[neenjahbrand0]

This was my first post and wasn't sure how to reply to others. So now I know the ropes sorry.

@ Comfi- Thou Shalt not Live- Such a dark track. Love it. Really smooth. Put something in with that wobbly subbass it sounds lonely and would probly do good with a nice Square/Saw wobble with it...nothing to much. But it's your imagination and I'd never take that away

@ Comfi- Karma- Nice usage of filtering in the intro synth, I could learn a thing from that. Electro Is murdering buddy new follower here. Clap seems a bit on the low side.

@ Kolorize- Z Czwartego Pietra- All I really have to say is I'm guessing Japanese vocals. Nice track I love fusion of dubstep and electro they should be married and have fidget step babies.

@ Fused Productions-I need a dollar- I don't like the reverb in the vocals. It makes them sound nasty and far away.

This is my first submission I call it Bomb, it's nasty bass dubstep. please give some feedback


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I get it your new, but seriously post some freakin feedback or no one is gonna give a shit about your tune.

[misch]

first post here, this thread is wicked been looking for some feedback on tunes and this a great way to run things! wicked.

@ swaggr - melotrip - kick hits thats for sure, and i really like the main progression its nice, not a big fan of the rubber ducky stab. guess you could maybe add some more melodies/synths/parts, drums to make it more interesting but the track is solid for sure, some nice keyboard solo/diddy's in there. nice work

@xjb - spaceface- intro is pretty sweet, pads maybe a bit thin, more fx and stuff? strings are cool, epic feeling, reece is pretty tearing, some nice edits, maybe a little too much fx? too much comb? snare is nice. some more fx/reece edits/textures could fill this one out a bit more buts its dope, i like how the outro goes right into those strings, sweet

@sinthetic-to the brink- interesting tune, snare could use some work, thin! drum edits are pretty sick though, all over the place, some cool ones for sure. drums could use some more beef/texture/character maybe, drop around 1:00 could use some work/filler but i think you already mentioned that. electro stab/bass is pretty fitting. cool.

@darj- silent anger- nice amb/fxs etc.. cool drop! i like the swell effect alot, with the string stab. not feelin the snare, maybe use more grit/feel. track could use some more percussion/hits down the line? all in all nice feel for sure, chill and dark!

@antman -origin- solid bass! this one just rollllllllllls along, 2nd bass edit/sound comes in a bit loud? around 1:49. track could use some edits/switchups/variations. but solid man. maybe some more percussion. what did you use for that main wobble? wasn't operator was it? like that ant avatar!

@dai low - blargh - nice, very playful reece line, nice textures/tones. the hats have a nice "light" feel to em. i like the keys, cool vox samples throughout, not feeling the bitcrushed blargh hah but thats about it. nice track.

first track bomber, little chill, little rough

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second track valkyrie, rougher, but still some feeling to it i guess

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[antman]

@misch: Really chilled track man I love your hats. And that riff in the background is really groovy dude. Awesome track

Your second track wasn't as good as the first but it still has the same feel to it. Really sort of chilled. Nice stuff.

@itsdeadpool: This style really isn't my thing so take my feedback lightly. I feel like it was way too much noise. My head almost started to hurt. Once again the super filthy stuff IS NOT my style.

@xjb: I really liked the track. Your basslines were awesome the way they glided up and down. Really cool track. I have no complaints.


And heres my newest track. Fun house!!

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